Can I ask what the “Bus cage” is? The stories pretty good so far, although Virgil is known to be extremely difficult to get mad, so the amount of swearing on his part in this fanfic is really uncharacteristic, so that’s one thing you could definitely work on for future Thunderbirds fanfics.
Also, assuming this is set in the 1965-verse, you got TB2's interior layout completely wrong. If you go on the Thunderbirds wiki and then to the 1965 TB2 page there are some cross-sections at the bottom of the page that shows its proper layout

Great story. I hope you swtart a new story soon.

brilliant end

really enjoyed this story and hoping there is one after this update soon xx

great chapter

interesting looking forward to the next chapter xx

I like the idea of the LABS, but I'm not sure how much rescue gear you could fit in something that small, after you have used the space for the pilot, engine, fuel, comms gear and sensors and machine gun turret plus ammo.

Would I be correct in assuming the camo has a blue/grey on the bottom to blend into the sky when people are looking up at the LAB and green on the top? Or do you mean a mixed colour camo pattern?

The wiki entry for Sarawak says there three basic areas, The densely populated hill area, the sea coast region and the mountain region. Then it goes on to say it has vast areas of both lowland and highland forest. Have they landed in the lowlands or the mountains?

great chapter

looking forward to what's in store next xx

Hmmm, can't wait to see how Scott is going to make a landing site without attracting the attention of anyone with miles. Missiles would certainly a tad on the spectacularly noisy side. He also need a lot of missiles. Using the landing rockets would set the place on fire and create a column of smoke visible for miles.

great chapter

Hi LMC - I love the power of the flashback. It compliments the present (when Virgil awakes) perfectly. It was very unsettling to read how he left Morgan in such a terrible emotional state. I wonder if he would have questioned himself as to whether he should have said a little more.

mcj

great chapter

and do you blame him. anyway so looking forward to the next update so update soon xxxxx

Ack! Another cliffie!

You did a great job showing that Jeff Tracy (& his sons) are a force to be reckoned with.

Heads will roll, I'm sure.

Interesting how you had Kyrano make the big reveal here - somehow I always figured that Jeff already knew, but never said anything. Your way makes a good deal of sense, but oh, to be a fly on the wall for the eventual conversation between those two good friends...

Now we have to wait until tomorrow, sigh.