|Reviews for fireworks|
| MixItUp chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Oh my goodness. How could you think this sucks? I love it! Especially the first paragraph...just so beautiful.
(Oh, but I did notice that your present tense dropped once or twice. Also, yay for present tense! It's so hard because you're not taught to use it much, but I really love stories written in it...as you've probably noticed).
| astrovagant chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
I liked this. It made me sad... but you delivered the story well. There were a few grammatical errors, and you were off when it came to verb tenses, but it was beautiful nonetheless. Just work on your verb tenses a bit and you'll be great! :)