Reviews for Something Sinful, Something Sweet
music96ninja chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
That was amazing.
finallyexploded chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
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SingingVocaloid chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
You evil you. It was a fantasticbulous story!
You're talented, very talented!
KatsukiLuv chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Oh hahaha that was kinda hot probably more than maybe hot yeah most likely. Damn sucks how that ended so sad... Can't wait for another - thanks
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Well, well, soldier...

This was beautiful. Simply beautiful. A true masterpiece of forbidden love, passion, an unforgiving Fate and the ultimate sacrifice, all done and described with beautiful words.

Outstanding work, Marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Ethereal-Noir chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This... was so... beautiful.
I actually teared up a little.

You are an AMAZING writer, by the way. :)
ShallowGlass chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This was absolutely beautiful. You are an incredibly talented author. Simply perfect. The emotions and symbolism were so accurately portrayed. Again, this is a work of the highest degree, simple fantastic on all counts.
Levin13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Fate... such a common thing to be writ of and with; so few who could us it and leave something in the heart. The vagueness of indescription that leaves scents of melancholic grayness around the world; acts of love that actually show the emotion and more than heats of flesh.
Have you ever cursed the fact that so many bad and good stories co-existed?
Terribly difficult to dig the mine, even harder to find silver.

This time, it has been found.
Polar Cenit chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I REALLY dont know why I didnt add this one. I KNOW I read it .

GReat work anyways!
MTR chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is a very good story! The ending was sad yet sweet. Well done I hope to read more stories like this in the future!
Mockery of Gold chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Masterfully written.

You, my friend, are very talented.
Li Fei chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
That's beautifully written. It's a really sad story, but I like it. The end gives me hope, so I like it.

But it would have been great if your story had been longer.
stalker01 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
shit I'm crying! T/T Wonderful *sniff* story. But sooo saaad *wail*
yuuki yami chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
that was to sad...i almost cryed! how could you? it was good but sad...
An0n chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
I cried a little. D': Such a lovely story you wrote here.
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