|Reviews for The Janto Trap|
| Aya2013 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
| Part-Time Irish chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Did you know that "The Parent Trap" is based on a German children's book from the 1940's?
I like the film, and I love the book (English title: Lottie and Lisa by Erich Kästner. You might find it interesting).
Your story is quite nice, but I think you could have given it more depth. You've got a lot of "telling" going on, instead of "showing". If I didn't know the film, I would have been lost. It's a nice idea, but you could have done better.
| Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Great job! Parent Trap, esp the original from many many years ago, has always been one of my fav movies, and now you've made it a thousand times better!
| BelladonasMom chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This was really cute. I liked the characterizations. Neat concept. Great AU and terrific twist on a very beloved movie of mine. Brilliant!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
brilliant story .but how did the twins get born ?
| Torchwood Cardiff chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Great story. Loved it.:-)