Reviews for Skylight
Bookdancer chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
I've been looking through Flashpoint fics and suddenly felt this overwhelming need to come back and read this one... so I looked in my favorites. It's not there?! I don't know what was going through past-me's mind after I read this the first time, because it's definitely going under my favorites now. And I didn't review, either?! *shakes head* I'm so disappointed in past-me right now. *sighs*

Anyway, fantastic job with this! The Sam whump is excellent, everyone's in character, and the character interaction and emotion... I mean WOW. Great job! :)
ConstableKellyAD chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
I hope there'll be a continuation!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
How is this not! Ugh please it's so good! More!
Biichi-gi chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Since I put a fave on this, I feel obliged to make a comment as well. Good tense action and nice interpretation of the befuddled aspect of shock. I also liked the 'wit of the staircase' approach to finding the skylight.
Man, I can't believe you did that to Sam! Better him than Ed, but all the same... The only thing i, being fond of him as well, would have liked to know is that he WAS going to be all right. I mean, Ed IS super, but he is not a physician;)
ladybria chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
The Sam whump was great, but I'd have loved a few moments after the event showing some sort of recovery. Otherwise well done!
Wedonthavetodance chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I loved this. Looking forward to more like this.
Ealasaid Una chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Well is he ok?
Hailee chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
More story!
Hope06 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Awesome job you should continue this. I would love to see a bit of the recovery
RMNicki chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
:o Whoa. This was really good, are his hands going to be okay!?
GlitterDustKJ chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
ASDFGHJK. Seriously, you're like a writing genius! This was amazing!
J9yee chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Another great Sam whump! Any more in that great mind of yours? :)
Kifu chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Even if with a few amount of words, you capture the scene very well. Not only that, but in the two Flashpoint stories I have read from you, you tend to stay very in-character. With many characters to work with, you manage to keep them all within the picture, but never lose your focus. Your attention to character interaction and emotion is definitely appreciated. It's a subject that a lot of fanfiction authors either skim over or fail at altogether.

I absolutely love how such a simple mistake can be so exciting in this short story. Sam's focus, Spike's endless encouragement, Ed's voice of reason ... it's very well played. I love these guys, and I feel you haven't failed them in your story. I would definitely want to read more from you.
Kc chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I really liked it are u going to add more or is this a one shot
JAM fan chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
aww my poor Sammy. He's gonna need some loving for sure! Another chapter would be great after this. Thanks for another great read.
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