|Reviews for Not Your Average Royal Treatment|
| AliceCullen3 chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
I LOVE IT!
| zchocolatebunniesrulezworld chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
"150 Ways to Make Sure It's a Multiform (and not your sister-in-law!)" Pfft.
I love the Doctor's crazy inventive tactics in making ENGLAND - what's a Wii Zapper?
River is so boss. Have I said that lately?
Ooh, "royal treatment", ;)
| feelingtwofootsmall chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
"Stop snogging and get on with the fighting already!" I concur. If there's one thing I would change about this fic, it's the random snogging. But maybe I'm just not used to River/11 yet- I keep forgetting it's canon.
Anyway! This is a good ending to your slightly surreal chapter one, and a good installment in it's own right (write?).
River beating up Queen Elizabeth is not something I'll quickly forget. Great job, and keep writing things!
| feelingtwofootsmall chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
"You don't just try and shoot the Queen of England's royal carriage during a parade!"
Advice, I think, that we should all take to heart.
Well, here's your review my dear, after all you have nagged me for days ;)
I love Harry's "since when did you pack heat?" and it was at that point that I burst out laughing while reading this. Just the thought of this kind of thing going on in the royal family is worth all the crack fic in the world.
Can we expect to see more fics with just the Doctor and River in the future? I'm liking it! :)
| Hannah Tennant-Cumberbatch chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
One second...*collapses into a laughter attack* ...Right, I'm back.
Honestly, that was the funniest thing I've read all day! Well, its only seven-thirty in the morning for me, but I can guarantee this will be the funniest thing I've read all day!
This story was perfectly in character (bar your Maj, obviously) and I just love Eleven and River's levels of charisma- I'm more of a 10/Rose shipper myself but 11/River is really beginning to grow on me, especially after this!
My favourite line- "Woah grandmother, since when did you pack heat?" I can guarantee you that sometime today I might actually say that to my grandma when she gets out her heat lamp (she has a bad hip).
Anyway, thank you for making me feel proud to be a British citizen. God save the Queen!
Hannah Tennant x
| pointlesspostits chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
Ah, this was brill! And made me feel strangely patriotic, I do love being British.
- Heinz x
| cmartlover chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
Great work! You captured the Doctor and River both very well.
| slightly so chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
| Zchocolatebunniesrulezworld chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
What a way to commemorate the Diamond Jubilee! I’m sure Her Majesty would be flattered. And LOL at Liz 2 being all badassly Liz 10-like, even if she is a multiform. The line “Wow, Grandmother, since when did you pack heat?” cracked me up :D
I adore the interactions between the Doctor and River :3 just like a married couple…I also love their individual voices; I think you got 11’s tone in particular down perfectly and pffft, River’s outfits ;)
I eagerly await an update
| Citizenofwhoville123 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This was interesting! I love the idea of another multiform! Please update soon!
| IShipItAllAndThenSome chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This is brilliant! River's "S&M like bikini"? Hilarious-and scarily accurate! Also, Doctor and River saving the Queen? I can hear a new national anthem!
| cmartlover chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Great job! I didn't expect the ending; I liked how River outwitted the Doctor.