Reviews for Explosion
GreenDrkness chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
This is cute I love the DaddyBats moment
Keep on the writes
TheImaginativeFox chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Glad he's okay, enjoyed reading this
BatFamilyNightwing chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
*Followed
maranda111 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Really sweet. I thought it was very good.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
good i like it
BlueBeetle1316 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Awwwwww. Daddy Bats. I love Daddy Bats. :) This story is so nice. And fluffy. And sweet. And cute. And well very nice :) YOU DID AN AMAZINGLY AMAZING JOB! Anywho I loved it :) if you didn't get that already. Heh heh.
Keep Dreaming. Keep smiling. Keep laughing. And Live ON!
Midnight1906 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
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guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
loved it ;)
Keepmovingforward2 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Awesome!
InvisibleNinja1234 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Oh

My

Clams

That was awesome! Second chapter?
JakeFL chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Excellent plot, excellent characterization.

There were a few things, though...

Fight scene needs more detail (one of the hardest things to do for most authors, I know, but practice makes perfect).

Clark Kent is a reporter for the Daily Planet. He does NOT have an MD. Though he probably does know first aid and the like, due to his line of work.

Leslie Thompkins is older than Bruce, seeing as she was friends with Thomas Wayne, so her hair wouldn't be blonde unless she died it.

Bruce has never had green eyes. EVER. They're traditionally blue, and they are dark brown on Earth-16, where YJ takes place.

Plus, the spelling and grammar and... yeah, those typically bug me.

Anyhow, still a pretty good story, regardless. I'd recommend getting a beta for next time. It'll only improve your writing.
random obsession chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
GAAHHHH AWWWWW I FREAKING LOVED IT! SOOO FLUFFY AND I JUST ADORE DADDY!BATS FICS! XD
Reina Grayson chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
awwww, Bat Fluff, so cute.