|Reviews for Broken Soul|
| Alyssa chapter 18 . 7/6
Your writing is simply amazing. I loved everything (although I have to hate what happened to Sam and Dean, there are reasons I don't write this level of fanfiction) from the events to even your elaborate word choices that really add to the story.
| Someone watching chapter 3 . 5/8
English isn't your first language? You speak it better than I do. And I don't mean that in a 'I talk like a slob' way, but you know the inflections, contractions, you're just more natural than I think I've ever been, and English is my only language.
| shadow1314 chapter 18 . 5/6
This story is amazing and so heart breaking! I can't stop crying and my pillow is soaked with my tears, Sam and Dean has been through so much, and I just want to hug them both! Thank you for writing this story xx
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/10
I just found this Story and liked it a lot! It's perfectly written, very emotional. Thank you for sharing!
| EmptyWithout chapter 18 . 2/7
Ok...ummm...I just found this story. It's been many years now since you posted this, and you might not even be on here anymore, but I have to tell you this story was amazing. This was just what I was looking for and you blew me away. If you are still here, I just wanted you to know this was superbly written and you MADE ME CRY! I'm going to look for other pics of yours now. WOW.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24
I'm a lazy fan... I enjoy tons of wonderful stories and very rarely do I take the time to thank the author. I'm not proud of this, but it's the truth. But this story is phenomenal! Not only did you have me hooked from the beginning, but I can't tell you how many times I've read it!
It's become my goto story in the Supernatural fandom. You definitely deserve a ton of recognition for that! Bravo!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2016
What do you mean English isn't your first language
Really, really fantastic work. If Dean wasn't gonna rip those SOBs apart, I would.
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/22/2016
Its 2016 now n still one of the greatest fanfics I'VE EVER REAAAADDDDD
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/10/2016
Ok ok here's the deal. This story is my life now and I need you to finish it up and give it a happy ending or I will go insane from the emptiness! Love the feels here, and hoping for a 99% total Sammy recovery from torture.
| seitanspawn chapter 18 . 10/8/2016
Agggghhh. You really know how to wrench my heartstrings, don't you? Terribly great story
| Anna chapter 15 . 10/4/2016
This story is so great, I'm a massive fan of supernatural and this is brilliant. Perfectly linked with the apocalypse and Sam drinking demon blood. I know this is late but I wanted to say thankyou so much for this. It's quite hared to get good spn fanfic around here! Thankyou very much again! Keep writing because you do it beautifully. :)
| CaitiAthena chapter 13 . 6/13/2016
yay, my baby boy's healing, now it's time that me and Dead go kill the mother fuckers who did this to my baby boy *loads shotgun*
| CaitiAthena chapter 4 . 6/10/2016
oh, I'm so gonna kill them
| Midnight H W chapter 18 . 6/1/2016
I notice that I'm reviewing this five years after it was published so I hope you're reading this, Alexandria M. R. I felt after my reading Broken Soul for the fifth time in as many days, you deserved a review from me, even though I've never written one before. I think your writing is truly masterful. You have some great lines and turns of phrase all through this, and every so often I pause just to think "She put that well!", but not at the expense of your telling of the overall story, which is wonderfully wrought. I wonder if you'd thought about making it novel-length? Perhaps I'm just greedy for more. This is fan fiction at its best and really goes beyond the Hurt Sam/Guilty Dean trope to say something quite beautiful which touched me immensely. It is a fine piece of writing. I hope you keep writing and try your hand at literary fiction for publication, if you haven't already.
On a personal note, I wish you well in your struggle with depression, which I suffer from too. Know that you are not alone.
| redrock chapter 18 . 5/2/2016
Oh. My. God. It was f*cking beautiful. Seriously.
It was (and actually still is) one of my favourite fan fictions of all times. I have to admit that I was a little scared when I saw your confession about not being a native speaker, but I was wrong. I mean, completely wrong. I don't know, but actually many non-English guys write better. I really, really regret I haven't found this story earlier. But it's still better than never, huh? ;D
Alright. Constructive criticism, you said. I don't know, but I couldn't get rid of the strange feeling during the final 3 chapters. Like they didn't really stick together. I mean, everything was suggesting that the 16th chapter would be the last one. The jump in time etc. It all looked like epilogue and the end. I don't know, but just something doesn't fit in that chapter, and it lasts until the very end. Not that I mind the plot, you really surprised me with this Satan thing and I find this one of the reasons I fell in love with the story.
At the end, I wouldn't be myself if I didn't say it. I found a MISTAKE. Yeah, you should be terrified as hell. Okay, that's it: somewhere near the end, when Sam had his mind erased, he asked Dean how long it had been, and he answered that six months. But it hadn't been six moths, it had been seven, 'cause six months of torture one month of recovery.
Sorry for all the people who read this comment before reading the end. Oops.