|Reviews for Broken Soul|
| CaitiAthena chapter 13 . 6/13
yay, my baby boy's healing, now it's time that me and Dead go kill the mother fuckers who did this to my baby boy *loads shotgun*
| CaitiAthena chapter 4 . 6/10
oh, I'm so gonna kill them
| Midnight H W chapter 18 . 6/1
I notice that I'm reviewing this five years after it was published so I hope you're reading this, Alexandria M. R. I felt after my reading Broken Soul for the fifth time in as many days, you deserved a review from me, even though I've never written one before. I think your writing is truly masterful. You have some great lines and turns of phrase all through this, and every so often I pause just to think "She put that well!", but not at the expense of your telling of the overall story, which is wonderfully wrought. I wonder if you'd thought about making it novel-length? Perhaps I'm just greedy for more. This is fan fiction at its best and really goes beyond the Hurt Sam/Guilty Dean trope to say something quite beautiful which touched me immensely. It is a fine piece of writing. I hope you keep writing and try your hand at literary fiction for publication, if you haven't already.
On a personal note, I wish you well in your struggle with depression, which I suffer from too. Know that you are not alone.
| redrock chapter 18 . 5/2
Oh. My. God. It was f*cking beautiful. Seriously.
It was (and actually still is) one of my favourite fan fictions of all times. I have to admit that I was a little scared when I saw your confession about not being a native speaker, but I was wrong. I mean, completely wrong. I don't know, but actually many non-English guys write better. I really, really regret I haven't found this story earlier. But it's still better than never, huh? ;D
Alright. Constructive criticism, you said. I don't know, but I couldn't get rid of the strange feeling during the final 3 chapters. Like they didn't really stick together. I mean, everything was suggesting that the 16th chapter would be the last one. The jump in time etc. It all looked like epilogue and the end. I don't know, but just something doesn't fit in that chapter, and it lasts until the very end. Not that I mind the plot, you really surprised me with this Satan thing and I find this one of the reasons I fell in love with the story.
At the end, I wouldn't be myself if I didn't say it. I found a MISTAKE. Yeah, you should be terrified as hell. Okay, that's it: somewhere near the end, when Sam had his mind erased, he asked Dean how long it had been, and he answered that six months. But it hadn't been six moths, it had been seven, 'cause six months of torture one month of recovery.
Sorry for all the people who read this comment before reading the end. Oops.
| xXxPhantomxXx chapter 18 . 4/26
This is a story I'll never forget:)
| xXxPhantomxXx chapter 17 . 4/26
You just ripped my heart out
| xXxPhantomxXx chapter 15 . 4/26
Dammit... the feels you've pushed onto me... just... argh! This is such a good story, I can feel the pain and sadness through the screen man.
| Fandolatry chapter 18 . 4/2
I'm sobbing on the train. This story was well-planned and well-executed. It was an ambitious idea and you went above and beyond. This is an amazing story.
| kandilyn chapter 18 . 2/19
Thank you. You kept your word and finished. Great story. So much emotion and pain. Both physical and emotional. So worth the wait. Thank you.
| Kas3y chapter 18 . 2/9
This story was amazing and I am so glad you completed it :D
I read it from the start, alll the way through as I had forgotten some details :D Keep up the fantastic work :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/1
Is there any chance of a sequal? Please?
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/1
Nonononono, that was just dean dreaming, right? RIGHT?! OMG I'm crying
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/30
Wow. Loved this. Your an amazing writer and I loved this fic. Thanks for writing. XD
| IggyInin20218 chapter 18 . 1/27
Way to go, Luci.
Never thought I would have to thank you,
but in the end I did.
You took away the cold
And brought back the sun
However you couldn't remove the scars
You couldn't take away the pain
Only gave back the missing piece/half
It's a broken one, yes, but it fits
Completing a, broken, forever
For two brothers named Sam and Dean...
I'm so happy...with this ending...no matter how broken it is. It's perfect! *cries* TvT
| IggyInin20218 chapter 17 . 1/27
H-how could you?! D"X My heart! Urgh, it's shattered! Poor Sammy and Dean...Here I was hoping that Dean was being all paranoid, but, geez, my hopes were dashed. )':
All because MUTHA FING TIM! Why couldn't he have just died with all the others? And where the heck was Castiel? Lol, he could've done something, but Dean never called. T_T
So much for wanting forever, no matter how broken it was for them. ;(
Goodness, girl, you're killing me! X"D This chapter hit all the feels for the brothers, the sappy sadness, and yet I still love this chapter! My eyes were burning by the end of the chapter, so much blinking was done to avoid sobbing in class. Lol, a classmate of mine noticed and asked 'if something was wrong' and I almost screamed "yes!". _ I feel numb...
Also I am so sorry for reviewing so late! I just checked for updates during my 7th period nearly flipping out when I saw that you updated, not only one chapter, but two, my day brightened (until I read this chapter...lol)! C":