Reviews for Stormseeker: Legacy of the Shapers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Liked it, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Lexen has a really addictive personality. In the first fic it was the dark force, then dark magic and the dream candy, and now the canisters. He really should've learned something from that 4 something year haze of withdrawal from the candy... This part of the series was really good snd I loved reading it. Now off to the next part! Bye! |
![]() ![]() How can this have so many words and so few reviews? All hope is lost for me... I like the plot so far, it's very creative. Congratulations on completing camp Nanowrimo! I love that thing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Serious consequences of Drug-addiction! Very Good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() developed a bit of a dislike for the world sort of midway through and stopped reading, but I do like how you ended this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lexen did *not* learn his lesson from the dream sweets, did he? *shakes head* Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd almost forgotten the dream sweets. I suppose it's the same sort of thing as his magical training carrying over, but it was an interesting surprise carryover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to seeing more of this story! Sirius's and Dumbledore's reactions next time Lexen comes through ought to be amusing! Also, I do believe this chapter pretty much answers my questions from my last review. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting so far. I liked how the pacing of this chapter showed his rush, as much as the words describing it. Keolah seemed a bit odd, though, when he repeatedly informed her of the threat and she went back to watching tv (television is perfectly accurate for scrying as much as tech, so I don't feel guilty with the term). I do find myself anticipating that at some time in the future, he does fire and forget patronus messages. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the previous story, hope you can keep up the rapid updates in this one as well! Thanks for writing. |