Reviews for Prince of Death
slythe-vyper chapter 28 . 3/20
i don't really get it why quidditch players are covered in mud. i mean, they are are flying, how do they manage getting covered with mud?
OperaEagle IcelynLacelett chapter 1 . 3/16
Read later-HP is Son of Hades.
Liz961 chapter 11 . 3/12
era-romance chapter 31 . 3/8
you missed hestia and Hermes in ur description of hades.
lolkid chapter 16 . 3/6
hyper up on sugar? really? I hate it when people write that type of nonsense..
Asteria25 chapter 23 . 2/23
If I am Percy, I won't believe Harry. And the thing about sentences, you really could break them up a bit. It is so difficult to read without feeling suffocated.
Torlo50 chapter 42 . 2/11
I liked the story, and even binge read it, but I find myself looking for something I find lacking.I'm not even sure what it is. It is almost like I feel your characters lack some sort of emotional depth. They feel like a flat character with no change in their personalities over time. They simply are as they are portrayed, and never change. The one change you do have, which is Hermonie and authority figures, was so expected that it almost hurts. There wasn't any surprises. I'll try to make time for your second book, but I don't know if I will. I'm certainly not jumping at the reins to read immediately, which is what I was hoping to find. This being said, I did enjoy the story, and thank you for the effort you obviously put into it
abbygal262 chapter 37 . 1/9
you said that the trustworthy headmasters r ussaly intrustef with the knowledge of the demigods attending hogwarts if u get rid of dumbledore would u make snape the new headmaster
abbygal262 chapter 11 . 1/5
1 One Piece Fan chapter 18 . 12/15/2016
ok never mind. i take back what i said, i mind. a lot.
1 One Piece Fan chapter 15 . 12/15/2016
I'd have preferred it if Harry was going to Hogwarts alone.. but i guess its okay if he doesnt follow them around or something all the time.
idonthaveashark chapter 4 . 11/23/2016
"you have horsey legs" .EVER.
Stella chapter 3 . 11/15/2016
I like this
Guest chapter 23 . 9/11/2016
dah nah nah booo
the real narnia chapter 11 . 9/11/2016
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