Reviews for Gunshots
lipamo chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
this is downright fucking beautiful. pure. love the atmosphere you create and the dialogue. of course the memory they share but dont talk about gives that story a wonderful hidden climax. and shows their relationship so perfectly: they are wonderfully in sync, but everything important between them remains unspoken. a genius you are, damn.
ella chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Ugh this is so well written! I really appreciate you keeping them in character as well.
Nothing like a short, good fic.
Katescats chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Hi I love your story.
Joel-Gomes chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
There are some stories that make me ignore their every imperfection, because of the way they are written. Form over content may not be the best way to appreciate a story, but it's nice sometimes. This story has both. I liked it.
tsccsarahfan chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Always wanted those 2 to get together. Maybe you'll do a sequel. Hint, hint.
Acacia Juless chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Okay, I like this. The plot is original, the setting is new and intriguing and the grammar is great as well. You've painted a clear picture here, a tale of trauma and sorrow and hope maybe for a brighter future. I hope you will continue. Favorited and following.
Feuerkindjana chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I like the gunshot/thunder picture.
Nancy chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I really enjoyed your style - you have a good and easy to follow writing style. Characterization is very realistic. I look forward to more. You end with, "maybe she's outgrowing this game: - so, I am wondering if you will extend/continue this story into Parker and Jarod getting together? Looking forward to your next writing to share with us.
NYT chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Enjoyed it. Nice job.