|Reviews for When Prey Becomes Hunter|
| Finnick-Annie98 chapter 50 . 2/13/2013
pls update ;(
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/18/2013
Oh, I don't like Johanna/Finnick but he hasn't met Annie yet, has he?
| Anla'shok chapter 50 . 1/4/2013
The difference between the Career districts and the others was well portrayed. Basically people respect Johanna since she proved she won by strength and not by luck. Her escort feels Johanna is acting like a spoiled diva, somebody slap Addie... It's always hard to find a balance at potraying escorts, since Snow (or whoever) picks genuine Capitol supporters for the job, but escorts can't all be idiots.
Musing aside, I'm starting to wonder what Johanna will do to get Jason killed.
| arabturky chapter 49 . 11/20/2012
awsome chapter! It was great :-)
| Anla'shok chapter 49 . 11/20/2012
Had I known you just needed a nudge, I'd have PMed you a month ago, lol. Thanks for posting so promptly
About your AN:
Aren't Victory tours so hard to write? I took ages to write mine because it's so hard to make them non-repetitive, meaningful and not downright depressing.
About this great chapter
she knew anyone who saw her as adorable had been through a similar fate to her own.
Ouch. Unfortunately true. I like sentences like that because they're deep instead of just angsty.
I like how Finnick is being supportive and helpful while not pretending being a victor is easier than it is. He seems very normal despite his sometimes wistful attitude. Then again, he's also a master at dismissing the dark things in his life. he's one of the victors with the most horrible life and he finds it in him to be kind and cheerful.
"Sometimes it's nice to feel like you haven't lost everything,"
That's so sad since, well, canon happened.
Pretty boy and bitch friends forever! It's nice to see you lay the foundations of a beautiful, durable friendship.
| Guest chapter 48 . 10/8/2012
I READ THIS WHOLE THING IN ONE NIGHT. WRITE MORE YOU WRITING MONKEY! WRIIIITTTTEEEEE! I COMMAND YOU! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA HHAHAHAHA
| Finnick-Annie98 chapter 48 . 9/18/2012
i love u ur amazing how do u do it!
pls update dancing with shadows its been forever im dyeing pls but ur still the best writer Ever
love bek xxx
| Anla'shok chapter 48 . 9/17/2012
I find it a bit odd, that part.
I understand that district citizens who knew some of the Games' casualties won't care about the victor, maybe even hate them. The others won't care either, maybe pity them a bit, maybe feel scorn, convinced only monsters can win the Games.
But come on, those people saw the Games! I'm sure Caesar on someone else comments the live version in the Capitol, and especially the daily recap. But in the districts, they have a less filtered view, they've seen enough Games to realize that many victors, especially the outer district ones, had little choice.
Then maybe Johanna thinks they all hate her, when really they just hate to have to go listen to her inane speeches.
She needs to learn to hold her tongue.
So we have seen Johanna determined to win and johanna distraught/in love. I'm afraid that after that little speech we might see angry and cold Johanna emerge.
| ILoveJohannaM chapter 47 . 9/12/2012
Update update update update! Please update soon Ive been waiting so long! Please update fast! I love your writing by the way!
| shadow.walk chapter 47 . 8/26/2012
awesome chapter 3 love the Johanna/Jason stuff *_* They're both so sweet and the hot kissing haha 3 love it
| arabturky chapter 47 . 8/23/2012
Pleaseee update soon!
| arabturky chapter 33 . 8/23/2012
That was so sad!
| arabturky chapter 16 . 8/23/2012
Pooor johanna! I lOve it! Update soon please! :)
| newnaless chapter 47 . 8/22/2012
I loved the way to was gentle with Jason and then flipped him so easily. that was great
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
No offense but you got it wrong finnick is the youngest person to win an he was 14.