Reviews for Listening to your heart beating
MyDarkAnnabelleLee chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
awesome story cant wait for more if there is more love it
taoist elf chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Aww... so sweet. This was a gooey awesome o/s. Very well written and just lovely (just a little fyi there is a 3rd to 1st shift for 2 paras... but who cares)

I loved this. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. I loved your clipped, terse Paul and the way you so efficiently condensed this story down to an excellent os.
Melody-Rose-20 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This is a beautiful piece of writing. It's good to see Paul as the caring one whilst not smothering her.
LOVER chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
i love it! 3 3
TaraJ93 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This was just wonderful. I'm a big Paul/Bella fan and this is definety one if my favourite one shots I've read of them! Well done and keep up the good work! I hope you write more as this one was just great!

Tara :)
UKJ chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Vane3131 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Oh this was good! I wouldn't mind if you made it a longer story! Lol
LCB chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Perfection! Well done! Love it!
Caro09 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
This is really good!
Lady Skye 1992 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
very good oneshot. i loved it.
KatyAtAll chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Loved it! I like Bella and Paul together. Loved your story
Jules Bells chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Okay time to cue: awwww! Nice to see you back in the game chicka!
Creamed Cheese chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Lovely! :)
LoriAnnRut chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Anjinsan chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Sweet short story!

Any plans on making it a longer one? ;)
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