Reviews for Dear Veronica
birdy81 chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
I love this! Bella naming her diary so it feels like a friend, adorably quirky. Her ADD tendency while writing reminds me of how I tend to write. Oh, and sharing a room with your 17 year old brother? Ugh! She deserves for something very good to happen with Edward, and some sexier panties. Can't wait to read more!
Alterite chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
I love how you split between RL moments and the journal (*mustnot say 'diary', diaries are girly*) entries with Bella's stream of consciousness.

Thanks for sharing!

Love from France,

A. xx
tff000 chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
can't wait for more
blueeyes11354 chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
He noticed her and he cares.
HollBeth chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Yeah, I know smoking is so, so bad...and I hate that it's harmful, but I hate more that some people, SOME people, just look sexy as hell when they do it. Some people make me wanna smoke just so I can try - in vain - to capture one iota of the coolness and sexiness they exude. Sad, huh?

I feel you, Bella. Plus, it's Edward. I mean, come ON.
DawnsWhimsy chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Again with the ball fondling lmao I love her!
LMBB chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Poor Bella. Her life is hard. Looking forward to more. Thanks!
karmel kaye chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
I'm excited to read this. I definitely need something new to read.

This should be interesting to read considering the fact that Emmett is Bella's twin. I can see why Bella needs to write in a journel. She has no one to talk soon so I can find out why Edward is bad news.
amwine chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
She is so cute. I feel bad that all she has is this journal to talk to about all this, but it is a good way to get it out. What is the age difference between Edward and Bella. Does Bella know exactly how old he is? I love it! Great job...thanks!
jmcfall chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Thank you more more please !
ajs99 chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
love love love xx
lavishone chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
I love the narrative style you are using here...Also love that Edward can "see" Bella when others ignore her...
Love M Go Blue chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Oh! the memories I have of Drakkar Noir...
detroitangel chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
Oh! I love bad news boys! ;)
MrsK81 chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Loving this so much!
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