Reviews for Apple Cinnamon Lessons
Reby222 chapter 19 . 3/25
This was so good ! I love it !
sanekittens chapter 19 . 5/9/2014
This was nice.
sanekittens chapter 17 . 5/9/2014
sanekittens chapter 7 . 5/9/2014
Oh damn.
sanekittens chapter 6 . 5/8/2014
Oh my
sanekittens chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Well go and find her dammit!
Pridemunkeyz chapter 19 . 4/27/2014
Finally finished this. Baby Britts are so cute but they turned me off sexy times between Brittana :p
GomezingRivera chapter 6 . 4/7/2014
It's not even about saying "stop" or "no", the way brittany talks and thinks about santana is completely gross, without any respect, she's like some kind of animal it's seriously scary.. And maybe it wasn't exactly rape but your writing make it seem okay to mistreat girls like that, what with the all santana apologizing for getting angry? It's nonsense, she almost got rape and was victim of violent sex she didn't want! Any girl with respect for themselves would go as far away as possible from brittany or even to the police. I really hope that's not your vision of how women should be treated in real life because if it is then you need serious help
cla chapter 19 . 4/7/2014
Omg sooooo cuteee
smoke-and-mirrors7 chapter 19 . 3/14/2014
i don't think i have ever read so much smut in a fic as in this one holy shit, great story though
NewNickName chapter 5 . 2/3/2014
Batman and Brittana chapter 6 . 1/2/2014
I'm really sorry to harp on this and I'm sure you're really tried of reading it. I'm not intentionally trying to be a jerk. The thing is every year I work with charities to help prevent domestic violence and sexual abuse against women, so I know a lot about the subject. It's very close to my heart and it kills me to read the next chapter and sentences saying that it wasn't rape because she didn't say 'no or stop'

Here is the thing you have to understand: Unless you physically say the word 'yes' under your own free will, it can be considered rape. That includes drunk sex, being 'talked into it or peer pressure', or simply not saying anything at problem here is that you have soooo many readers-young readers, who are going to read this and think those same words are true. "That it's not rape if she didn't say no" and that's what I find unsettling and why I'm making this post. It's something I'd like you to know for your own personal safety as well as the future safety of all your female readers.

I promise I'm coming from a place of concern and I'm not trying to be an ass. As far as dubcon goes, I'm cool with kinks. I'm a really open minded person like that. But as someone who has talked to abused teen and other women who don't fully know their body rights I can't just sit by and not say something here. Sorry again, but it needed to be said and clarified.
Batman and Brittana chapter 5 . 1/2/2014
So first I want to say that I'm enjoying this story a lot so far. I in no way intend to be harsh. As a writer I commend you for making choices and sticking to your guns. That's a trait that everyone should have.

That being said, this chapter was a bit intense and probably should have a more clear warning at the top. I didn't really realize what I was getting into. I've read over the other comments and I have to agree that Brittany forcing herself on Santana because she's inexperienced or she saw it in a porno doesn't make her actions excusable. If your causing pain and the other person doesn't want it or didn't say yes to it in the first place it is rape.

On another note I hope in future chapters Brittany shows her softer more girly side. G!P Brittany is fun to read now and then, but sometime she sounds more like a dude/puck and less like the Brittany we know and love.

okay okay, I know that was a lot of criticism, but I have plenty of positives to share too. I love how sexy you've made Santana and her background is so unique. There is so much there to play with and I hope that you do in the up coming chapters. I'm interested to know more about Santana's relationship with her baby brother and if he finds out that Brittany's hooking up with his sister.
xxKOEMI-CHANxx chapter 19 . 12/21/2013
Loved it! Loved all the kinky sex! And loved the plot twist with Quinn.
GleeLover0210 chapter 19 . 10/25/2013
AWWWW sooooo cute i love the story you have amazing skills!
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