Reviews for Clean and White
abyphile chapter 2 . 2/27
I loved this story. I hope that you will post a continuation some day. Did Thor piss off Odin again that he was on Midgard in Starfleet? Was he possibly mortal again or at least partially depowered, so that he apparently died saving his ship?
KeidaHattori chapter 2 . 12/26/2014
i'm guessing that jim's father is thor.
I Just Won A Free Toaster Oven chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
I know this is marked as complete, but I'm a little bit confused. Will there be more?
Elaine du Lac chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Oooh! You're getting somewhere here. I'm looking forward to reading what you had in mind.
Doctor Frostybuscus chapter 2 . 3/8/2014
OOOOOOH I GET IT!
zeynel chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
Very interesting, hope you will continue this!
Akemi713 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
Oh WAIT THOR IS HIS DAD ISN'T HE!? I JUST REALIZED THEIR BOTH PLAYED BY CHRIS!
Mystic Myra 8 chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
continue...CON. !
continue this into a chapter story. it's really good
Edowen chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
This is a very interesting take on things. I would LOVE to see more of this story.
MtSilver chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
Yes! I like that someone mentioned Baldr he always seems to get left out. But... THOR'S DEAD!?
Mistress1337 chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
I really likes it! More would be awesome!
Chrystyaane chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Are you going to continue this in another fic?
Fey Beauty chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
This is great stuff! Are you planning to do more on this? Because I would LOVE to read more of this story! And this just pulls at your heartstrings with how Loki interacts with Jim. Also I can just imagine how Jim would react to finding out WHO exactly his father is as well as to who Loki is. So please add more!
Kerttu chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
SO reccing this story to many friends!
Aralas Baggins chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
Fantastic start please update!
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