Reviews for The Proposal
Aidyl James chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Sweet.
Jenn Deering chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
I needed this sweet fic sooooo much.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
It's great to read crap instead of that swear F word lots of authors like to have come out of Jane's mouth. It's much closer to the tv's Jane. That's one thing I appreciate about your story, you keep them close enough to their tv counter parts & inject a little something special that we are looking but not reajlly finding in the show yet. Thanks. A Bostonian Fan.
LucastaPastaTheShamanRamen chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This? This is a perfect representation of how this pairing's proposal should and would go down. It's so perfectly Rizzles!
Anon chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Really sweet, and I could easily see Jane doing just that and messing everything up before finally pulling it out in the end.

Small issue? "She put the ring from Maura's box in her left ring finger" I think it would have been really painful if she put it IN her finger. ;) Sorry, couldn't resist.

Looking forward to reading more of your work - it's really good. :)
DarXe chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Awwww, sweet and kinda funny.
Hollyzdog chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
THAT'S SO ADORABLE! Seriously. I got a few tears in my eyes. If this ever happened on the show, Oh my god so many Rizzles fans would die of extreme happiness. :)
Alexia2002 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Awww soo sweet!
saoulbete chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This is so sweet and so perfectly them. Jane freaking out because things didn't go right, and just messing things up worse, but then everything getting to come together in the end...so sweet and fluffy and awesome. I like.
onezero chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Jane is adorable with her "no no". I wouldn't blame Maura for not understanding with the way Jane communicates like a five-year-old. The whole situation is cute. Thanks for this!
afret2010 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
"No", really Jane ;-)

This was great, by turns sweet and sad and funny and sweet again.
CptStabs chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Love it!
RaneJizzoli chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
AWWWWW! Hahah so cute. loved it. I could just imagine Jane managing to put her foot in it just like that teehee. Great stuff.
deathofamockingbird chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I agree with Jane. I'd be super awkward if Maura said no...lol. Very cute!
LFeatherhorn chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
happy feelings yay!

especially awesome after having just seen the extra scenes from the first episode of season 3 :(
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