Reviews for Life changes
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
This was hard to read. Edit please
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
best story ever, i hope bonnie will be damon true love
Evelyn chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Hi!:-) I loved the chapter 1. Will you write more chapters? Pleaseee! I like where this story is going :-P
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Please please please update soon ;)
lets fly away chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Great Fic,Please Continue3
Lala chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
U shoul continue this is good
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Keep writing that was good ;$
QueenSavvy117 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
silly13 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
IrisWestAllen chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
A great plot line for a story! please do carry on...
jennifer I chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Is English not your first language because your grammar and sentence structure is really poor. You need to edit before posting. And your story lacks any kind of real description or depth to the writing. It honestly reads like you wrote it in about two minutes.
PinkishHueMidniteBlue chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
This could be a really good story. Just make sure to edit your work. You know, check the spelling and punctuation. It will help the readers get into your story better.

Hope you do continue and make the chapters longer! :)
RayenMacawi chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I loved it, I hope you update soon.
ayana45 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
First I want to say that this story has potential but maybe slow down and check your grammar a little? I'm not the grammar police and it's not something I usually comment on. But I think all you need is to take a moment when you're finished with a chapter and ask if it looks or sounds right. I AM hoping to read the next chapter soon.
chloevamp chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I love it do far please update again soon :)
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