Reviews for The Cave
hyenadream chapter 13 . 1/28
Maintaining the plot and the romance was balanced impressively. Although the backstory of Amon had some heavy involvement of spirits, it's much more consistent than just suddenly changing an Equalist leader into a blood-bending prodigy with dad issues.
Some words were a bit complex, but its meaning was easy to understand due the sentences. Not too long and complex, therefore easy to read through.
And the chapters were just the right amount, letting me read without getting tired or easily bored. Depicting inner thoughts and sense were well written. It's a nice fan fiction.

P.S Pretty glad that Bolin got some good screen time(or story time) in this story. You did a nice job of making him a supporting character.
ChengRedhaired chapter 7 . 12/6/2017
Oh my spirits. Reading this is almost like reading fifty shades
ChengRedhaired chapter 13 . 12/5/2017
Wow. Now that's an epilogue. Wow. I'm impressed. I'm literally speechless.
ChengRedhaired chapter 11 . 12/5/2017
Tarrlok that son of a gum chewing bitch
Scarlet chapter 4 . 7/15/2017
This is getting so awesome! I luv it! Keep up the great work!
Wiipuu chapter 13 . 5/31/2017
I liked that more than I had any right to.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2017
Okay...this shipping is intriguing and all, and also makes sense in the weirdest way...but wth?! How does lust bloom in these situations, let alone affections? Ah well...ignore this complaint. I'm just here for some steamy romance.
Aku no Kotei chapter 13 . 11/3/2016
Just beautiful story
crazy-acting chapter 13 . 8/4/2016
Oh dear lord... This fic has been the death of me. Thank you so much for writing it, it was brilliant! Your style is very beautiful, you've got undeniable talent!
SheLovesGreenTea chapter 13 . 3/13/2016
What an awesome story. Captivating plot, the characters are IN character, exquisite vocabulary, and excellent pacing. This story is absolutely DIVINE.
a fan chapter 13 . 1/20/2016
Great story! well written! Thanks for the happy ending too
Softie chapter 13 . 8/9/2015
Hm. I don't agree with a lot of things but hell, it wasn't me writing it so who am I to complain. But can't deny the fact it was written well with a plot that was surprisingly surprising.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/29/2015
If it was one of Tenzin's kids watching korra I'm gunna' laugh so hard I might cry
Cellotastic chapter 11 . 5/24/2015
I hope you realize that for a lot of people, this is probably their favorite fanfiction, period. I know it's my favorite hands down, and I was really happy to learn that you had written a sequel. I hope you're doing well and enjoying life!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/7/2015
That was the most perfect ending i have ever seen on
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