|Reviews for The Cave|
| Scarlet chapter 4 . 7/15
This is getting so awesome! I luv it! Keep up the great work!
| Wiipuu chapter 13 . 5/31
I liked that more than I had any right to.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/21
Okay...this shipping is intriguing and all, and also makes sense in the weirdest way...but wth?! How does lust bloom in these situations, let alone affections? Ah well...ignore this complaint. I'm just here for some steamy romance.
| Aku no Kotei chapter 13 . 11/3/2016
Just beautiful story
| crazy-acting chapter 13 . 8/4/2016
Oh dear lord... This fic has been the death of me. Thank you so much for writing it, it was brilliant! Your style is very beautiful, you've got undeniable talent!
| SheLovesGreenTea chapter 13 . 3/13/2016
What an awesome story. Captivating plot, the characters are IN character, exquisite vocabulary, and excellent pacing. This story is absolutely DIVINE.
| a fan chapter 13 . 1/20/2016
Great story! well written! Thanks for the happy ending too
| Softie chapter 13 . 8/9/2015
Hm. I don't agree with a lot of things but hell, it wasn't me writing it so who am I to complain. But can't deny the fact it was written well with a plot that was surprisingly surprising.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/29/2015
If it was one of Tenzin's kids watching korra I'm gunna' laugh so hard I might cry
| Cellotastic chapter 11 . 5/24/2015
I hope you realize that for a lot of people, this is probably their favorite fanfiction, period. I know it's my favorite hands down, and I was really happy to learn that you had written a sequel. I hope you're doing well and enjoying life!
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/7/2015
That was the most perfect ending i have ever seen on
| legendofpanties chapter 2 . 2/23/2015
Haha you did a good job playing with Amon's mental state.
| legendofpanties chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
This is pretty cute so far
| DragonTurtle3 chapter 3 . 2/18/2015
What happens with Korra this chapter is legitimately impressive. She outright admits that Amon is correct in some of the observations that formed the tenants of the Equalist movement. She then pretty much asks for his help in looking for a solution. It’s difficult for Korra to ask for help, or admit she doesn’t know the answer to a question. So this is so competent character development.
Amon’s, however, has been fast-tracked. It’s way too early for him to start having an internal monologue along the lines of “I have to be right… I must be…” Korra was right about human nature being the source of the problem, but it isn’t a strong enough point to just shatter every hope Amon has in his organization’s viability. How many times have you heard “guns don’t kill people?” I actually see a lot of wisdom in it. That doesn’t mean it’s wise to let people dispense automatic weapons at drive-throughs. The elimination of bending has merits in that destructive capability won’t fall into the laps of random individuals. The point is that he wants to make things FAIR. To make them EQUAL. Also, although the show didn’t explore this aspect of the world much, it would be interesting to propose that some people sincerely see bending as unnatural (which, technically, it is).
But the egregious sin here, which nothing makes up for, is the fact that more words were dedicated to Amon getting a boner than him wondering if the earthquake killed any innocent civilians or his soldiers.
A lot of times it get down my thoughts on a Word document as I’m reading a fic. The preceding all came to me before we got to Amon just suddenly groping Korra. This was legitimately one of the most clumsy romantic scenes I’ve experienced in a Korra fanfic (unless we count the ones that are already so poorly composed as to be close to illegible). The fact that this was written before the finale isn’t an excuse for how illogical this is. It doesn’t matter if by the end of this fic, he’s a horny 22-year-old dreamboat, Amon was never shown to be so easily distracted or perturbed as this. Hardly anyone would suddenly be as infatuated as this character is.
| DragonTurtle3 chapter 2 . 2/18/2015
Is this really just going to just be some Beauty and the Beast story? Where Amon's character is altered just by how nice Korra is? Scratch that, by how sexy and vulnerable she is?
I don't buy into Amon changing his opinion of benders, or just Korra, by seeing how hard she works. Even before this season ended, we saw he was a pretty skilled planner and manipulator. He can play crowds like an instrument, and knows how to break individuals on a psychological level. Even this story acknowledges that he's managed to traumatize Korra with their limited interactions. Combined with the resources at the disposal of Equalists, and the scale of their coverty operations (by episode 7 we had an underground factory with Big Daddy tanks), it isn't hard to figure that he's managed to get a ton of information on a public figure like Korra. Yet so much of what she does (and what she looks like) is just SO extraordinary to him.