|Reviews for Blue Fur?|
| Nick4120 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Oh wow. Leo and Aeris find an unconscious person and brings him home.
That has TOTALLY never happened in fanfiction.
Congrats on your TOTALLY ORIGINAL fanfiction
(totally not an overused rip off)
| pablo234 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
you said it was complete ... that''s an accident right?
| Bogren chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Not a bad start. Just a few things should be said...
First: Google isn't a number. It's a search engine. Googol is the number you want. Always check your research.
Second: Try to make sure this isn't a self-insert. You can write whatever you want, but inserting yourself into a story is generally frowned upon. The story appears to be one due to the first-person narration and the need to suddenly make the character into a cat in order to fit the story.
Third: The character became a cat two weeks before the story takes place. After that amount of time he/she is still wandering around to the point where they pass out in the snow from the cold?
I had something else but I can't remember it right now... But keep writing.