|Reviews for Shala|
| Tara.K.Walker chapter 18 . 3/8
I understNd you may never see this review, however, I would very much like to tell you...THIS IS AMAZING! I love this story so very much! I could go on and on about how good it was, and still is... So I will! First off, there are obviously lots of stories with Danny being a girl but you took it to the next level and made it so much more! You didn't just say Danny was a girl you explained how she was a girl but wasn't alowed to be herself. Another thing, all the pairings were amazing! The were very unique and defanently new! I love Vlad's change in heart! And that end? OMG I almost cried! And trust me when I tell you, I do not cry easy! But what I'm trying to say is this story was really brilliant! There were a few tiny problems like spelling and grammar but nothing I found I couldn't make an exception for... I do hope you keep writing! I loved this story and I'm sure many other people did as well! Oh and I'm also sorry for not reviewing every chapter...I'm lazy and I like to keep my comments to myself so as not to ruin the mood! Lol but really, great story!
| KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 18 . 12/27/2014
I loved it
| phantom1234 chapter 10 . 7/31/2014
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/26/2014
This is so cute, but soooooo cheesy
| jim89 chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
okay,, you lost me on that one, then he mentioned the be lost, Tucker and Sam. Last we heard from them. They were angry they never told Danny to go away permanently. Unfortunately
Danny never bother talking to them again. Danny Lily gave Sam and Tucker the cold shoulder telling Lancer not even listen to them essentially slandering them. And without any way to talk through their problems of course it will get angrier. And given that Jazz exiled basically no man's land and given that Danny's mom more a mother tto San then her own. She definitely want to help,, or at least give Danny's parents the defense, so not totally railroaded, thanks to Danny's public lynching on TV.
bottom line, to Danny ever once tried talking to Sam, Tucker, since he moved in with Vlad.
We then try to sort things out with jazz. No Danny told him told to go to hell or threatened them.
there. The victims here not Danny here. Danny problems. In a time. We just pulled the truths
most of Danny's problems especially if his parents. He brought on himself.
Danny chose actively she chose to. Any time over the few years that he could've said no
I think from here. I'll take a break from reviewing remaining chapters. I given my word That I would read this whole thing. The way it's going. I know what not to like the way it's going to end
| jim89 chapter 13 . 5/6/2014
what the hell? I think you got totally off the rails here. Okay I do understand Danny has issue with his birth parents. And telling him off was probably right. But to have them arrested and dragged off to jail. And the go so far as making a public lynching. Danny's essentially set up an angry mob
convict his parents. He might as well. So the guillotine in the town square and take them out
I might give this chapter more credit, is actually, charges for Danny's parents. In fact he also for jazz a new one. And you wonder why jazz is I'm the villain, she freaked out. Danny threatened to kill her
now he published embarrassed her and made her a fugitive. Taking away her parents as well
the Danny really expect jazz is only show up and say I hug and be friends. Know she's gonna get a guide by take his ass out. The giver any other option. She'll be sent to prison by the Lynch mob that he just set up.
Is this bad now. I wonder how the remaining chapters ago
| jim89 chapter 12 . 5/6/2014
well the The first, in one single chapter you created shadows hold back story and personality
of more anyone's ever done for that character.
On the other hand eill and ann new tendency to discord and to be sort of self-centered is kind of scary
almost want the old Danny back and Danielle. When the greatest strength they cared about other people and how their actions affected people. in their new sisterly life. They seem to be taking a lot out of Paulina's book how to behave.
It could go either way at this point.
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 11 . 5/6/2014
okay, this chapter was actually well good. I mean last couple chapters seem to be getting on my bad side. Seeing the Queen bee of Casper high gain take down well worth it. Of all the all the people in the story that got a raw deal. She's the first one that deserves it. Unlike jazz, Sam and Tucker. So far
As for DASH being a caring human being. Or at least consider it. Again, this must be bizarro world
were good, evil evil is good.
I'm seriously considering the offer should of put alternative universe. At the top of the story
We shall see
| secretwhovianpony chapter 18 . 4/27/2014
Okay, 1- This was awesome! I do so love a good gender-bender story. 2- That last line. I'm really, really confused. Does this mean that Danny really was a boy at first here? Y'all have seriously thrown me through a loop here. On a side note, I find the positions kind of cool. Especially making Johnny's Shadow be his little brother. And Amorpho actually be a girl. And Wulf be under a spell from Desiree. Those were some really cool twists.
| jim89 chapter 10 . 4/21/2014
what that hell? I mean literally . Jazz is officially gone off the deep end. I don't know who this person is. But is not jazz here.
When the heck she start thinking that her sibling is a test subject. Last I checked jazz fault ethics 101
a number one people are not test subjects, especially your family and your siblings.
She is a shot at a better life then her parents could've given her and to loving sisters. Vlad word
alone and his recommendation could've got into any college or university.
Why on earth someone like her friends list. Spectra. The moment she did her mind got washed and destroyed.
I really hope some way to save, jazz, and all this and bring her back to Danny and Danielle side
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 9 . 4/21/2014
okay, maybe this is a little insanity, speaking, but what the heck happened to jazz, and she had a completely bonhomie or something. Why the heck should be working to psycho shrink ghost.
And be so hung up and keeping Danny acting like a boy and at home. The whole thing seems completely insane.
And if your goal is to get the collegethen we will begin with Vlad and her two sisters actually make it easier. She could write the damn paper on the new family unit. Heck, she could write a paper
on Danny learning his own gender identity. After being forced away by his parents.
Either way, jazz has absolutely nothing to gain from going against them at this time.
On the other hand, the psycho ghost shrink.
Will get to harvest jazz misery. When she realized she'd been played and lost her caring family or
when she messes up Danny's. Either way it's a win-win for spectra. she's is on here not jazz
jazz is her puppet
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 8 . 4/21/2014
Danny and Danielle bonding good, glad acting like a decent human being that is very hard to swallow
ninja monkeys flying on robot pigs would be easier to believe. But I give the writers props for bringing it here
okay, that one drinking the insanity juice or something. Tucker and Sam literally trying out Danny
because of his secret of being a girl. That's makes no sense. Give it everything they've gone through minus Phantom planet. It's hard as hell to believe that when this comes up they would quit.
Yeah were into OOC territory here, I did think of four episodes from the original series alone. That would've been better reason to quit backing Danny. Do it now makes him look borderline schizophrenic
Just say you surprised me here, guess we'll see where things go
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 7 . 4/16/2014
well I don't know with this, you're brilliant or insane, your take on jazz here is unique
so she's either was crookedly evil itself center, or which you don't with Spectra
whacked her mind. Remember Spectra like to get in kids heads and mess with them. So she can harvest their emotions. And jazz mentioned she didn't start psychoanalyzing Danny for her own self gain until after Spectra.
The fact she's also playing with Tucker and Sam's head means she did because saying indirectly all the problems between them. If jazz is truly evil that I'll be truly surprise. That's usually completely out of character. Her
unless you're writing AU here
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
at least ell came to live honestly. Now that's a true self
now we'll see how everyone else takes this
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 5 . 4/16/2014
well it looks like Sam is a bit angry, but obviously she built a lot of her life ideals that Danny was a guy and she could love him. The find out is not the case. Definitely heard her
she's not bad just in a bad place. shock and all that
she needs time to deal, as long as someone else doesn't put fuel on the flame
We shall see