Reviews for Mr Wrong
Mmisery chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
guren666 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
YAY! I want more!
JadeRose1 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Cute story
notherenotyet chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
like :-)
ilzehs chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Hey, this was a pleasant surprise. & it came out wonderfully well I believe. I REALLY liked the idea & how you wrote it. I am slowly but surely seeing your grow into a style I am really keen writing wise. This was just another step.

I was looking forward to see how would you write it exactly. I liked how it was from Jay's perspective mainly & how through those flashbacks & his thought process as he watched Adam w/ other men his suppressed feelings that were far from just friendly love came through. Jay's problems w/ his relationships in the past & how basically those boyfriends made him come face to face w/ what he feels for Adam, it was very nice.

Good job! So great to see you writing again since we both have been pretty much dead writing wise, lol! Keep it up!
LadyDragonsblood chapter 1 . 6/5/2012

Wish I could have been a fly on the wall for that "first time"!

Nice bit to make me smile on a horrible day! Thank You!