|Reviews for Harry Crow|
| pheonix4evrmoore chapter 1 . 34m ago
Normally I don't review however when I find myself smiling every Sunday afternoon when I get an email on my phone knowing that there's something look forward and that my life got a little bit brighter with Harry Crow in it. How can I not. I've been reading fanfiction since I was 13 I'm now 26 this story definitely stands out in my mind. I've had so many favorite stories just stop suddenly and leave you wanting more knowing that no more is ever going to come is heartbreaking. I simply wanted to say thank you so much for your reliable an amazing story that does more for me than you'll ever know. I have chronic depression and just knowing what harry crow would say and do puts a smile on my face that just makes me giggle so again thank you and I'll see you and harry crow next Sunday
| foxee-chik chapter 93 . 37m ago
wow! keep goin! i like it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 93 . 45m ago
God DAMNIT cliffhanger. Robst you evil/marvelous writer I WANT NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!
Excellent work, I'm glad to see how everyone seems to be maturing and working well together, not to mention the plausible dynamics being shown.
Perfectly honest: I think this should honest to God be published. I'd pay money to read this as a series.
| SaintHera chapter 93 . 55m ago
Yes Victor should definitely be sorted. I've always loved the way that you treated his character and I adore the integrity that he showed here. In this story Harry seems to serve as a catalyst to inspire that into people. I love the way every one is developing. I"m not sure which house he should be in, I'm sure most people will favor Slytherin, but I think he would serve as a wonderful foil for the twins in Gryffindor. Hufflepuff would love to have him, but I think he and Cedric are too similar in nature. I'm sure you'll do it perfectly though. I'm on spring break this week, with light shifts at work, so I'm going back to chapter 1 and reading through. . . .again. :) I've read your stories more often than I"ve reread Jo's books. I can never forgive her for some of the liberties she took with the characters, and I hate the final two books. In your stories though, Harry always ends up with the right witch.:)
| old-crow chapter 93 . 1h ago
I just had a great weekend, reading and rereading all 93 chapters. Overall what continues to impress me is the progression and just plain exceptional storytelling that you have in your tale. I'm always amazed with the stories that turn into long stories when the little themes that were introduced in the earliest chapters continue working much later in the book.
Regarding your question about Victor, I suppose it depends if you have in in mind as a sixth or seventh year. I believe he was a seventh year based on the Lexicon. If it were my tale, I'd place him in Hufflepuff as a dorm mate with Cedric.
All the best,
| Angela3511 chapter 93 . 1h ago
Great chapter! It's nice to see that Ron is maturing and growing into what could be a perfectly acceptable young man, but Molly is still overly impetuous and self-important (for no good reason I can see). Harry's strategy with the dragon was ingenious, kudos to you! I can't wait to see what happens when Dreadful Dolores gets her comeuppance from Batty Bella. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| jordan.w.easton94 chapter 93 . 3h ago
Amazing as always
| Fyreheart chapter 93 . 3h ago
The lack of common sense among wizards is ably demonstrated by the announcer for the First Task. What would Harry’s response have been if Fleur had been killed because of that man’s stupidity in causing the dragon to be woken?
I think Harry’s actions in the first task was absolutely brilliant. I haven’t seen any other author come up with something so simple, yet effective. Very well done!
Dumbledore’s bigotry was blatant and one would think that the “master manipulator” wouldn’t be so stupid, but he does have his blind spots, doesn’t he? Delores was even worse, but I was delighted with the results. Firstly, Dumbledore is voted off and then Victor announces his desire not to be associated with Dumbles and going so far as to leave the school once the tournament is done. I have to admit that I enjoyed Snape’s comments to Dumbledore very much.
I always thought the Weasleys were bigoted against Muggles in canon, although they didn’t even know they were. They had a cousin who was an accountant, but “didn’t talk about him”. Then there was Arthur who after years, still couldn’t pronounce electricity or telephone. They seemed to treat non-magicals as children; pat them on the head, but not really up to the level of wizards. In this story, Molly’s bigotry is as blatant. I’m glad the other children weren’t cut from the same cloth.
Regarding Victor and sorting, I can easily make a case for three of the four houses. He shows the loyalty of a Hufflepuff and certainly isn’t afraid of hard work. He’s obviously ambitious, as he’s a professional Quidditch player while still in school, so would fit into Slytherin. His bravery was visible in the first task, so he could find a home with Gryffindor. He’s also obviously intelligent, but doesn’t seem to love learning for learning’s sake, so I don’t know that I would put him in Ravenclaw. Based on his speaking out in front of everyone and admitting that Dumbledore had told him about the dragons, he demonstrated both bravery and loyalty to his friend. Maybe he should be in both houses?
| morcheller chapter 93 . 3h ago
I would limit sorting Viktor into either Ravenclaw or Griffendor. To put him in Slytherin would be to cliche and I think his personality is too strong for Hufflepuff.
| Victor should be chapter 93 . 4h ago
sorted and sorted into Hufflepuff and Gryffindor, the first person ever to be in two houses at once.
| jrock919 chapter 93 . 4h ago
I think that the ministry and the goblins should have enough people watching Umbridge that if Voldy's last two followers are seen with her they should take all three of them out right there.
| regina.phyfer chapter 92 . 4h ago
Please please please can we have an update
| ladysavay chapter 93 . 5h ago
I'd hate to see Victor have to leave his choool because of Albus. Better i would think, would be if the Bulgarian Minister fired the old man.
Great chapter, but what a tease. All those guns, primed and loaded and unused.
I really hope you write the confrontation between Molly and Arthur. So very often we are TOLD that Arthur finally lost his temper and told her off, but so very seldom do we read it. I like Arthur as a character and his only flaw is allowing his wife to walk all over him constantly. Fixing that, once and for all, is very satisfying.
Can't wait for more.
| keichan2 chapter 93 . 5h ago
Given the original second and third tasks, Umbridge’s comment about “seeing” the action it quite ironic!
Thanks for the new chapter!
I hope to read more soon!
| Gruffard chapter 93 . 6h ago
Slytherin. Solid. Viktor shows to be cunning in the tournament, and ambition if nothing else. Not only world famous athlete? Seems to be top or nor top of class, and still goes for the Triwizard Cup? He doesn't need the fame nor the money. He just wants more. Slytherin. Not evil Slytherin, just solid healthy (mostly) ambition.
Another solid chapter. And your Molly is an idiot, but not that far off from canon.