Thank God you guys were not content to follow canon!

Canadates see dragons 6 pass out. Next to them, Quincy, M.E. they see a dragon, not a dead body for autopsy.

i just popped into a random chapter after the first book to see if anything changes, it doesn't. same problems that the first had arr present here. at this point it seems like you care more about your author's notes and showing us how 'funny' you are than you do about the actual story. same C- effort put in here.

Great second installment! Very good story with good action Elements

Damn what an emotional chapter. Even if i would like to had him go a bit differently but it was a fitting piece!

My condolences for the passing of your Father.

i would like to see a sub section that needs a password to get into for those who like to write and or read lemons

Love the Author notes and mockery,lol. Honestly people,have none of read the Dragonriders series? Mating flights Overwhelmed all of them, Period !

Damnit. This story has made me cry like 3 times

Omg. I can’t hold off writing a review any longer. I LOVE your writing, this and the previous fic. You’re sooo talented I love everything about it . After I finish this series I will be taking a look at any other stories you do

I don't know if you already did it but could we really have a separate fanfiction that's the who who adventure, it sound funny to read

Why are fantasy writers always such pervs?

Red was definitely out of order on their review, but you have contradicted yourself in your own story to a degree. You stated "will never write Slash" yet you did when you wrote about the Bullstrode trio. It may not be a sex scene which is perfectly fine but you wrote it none the less.

I think that the poly the Harry has is just fine the way you have it without the slash as not all polys have such and not all in a poly are comfortable sharing at the same time.

On that note I still think Hermione's whole meditation crap was not needed for the level of drama and angst the trio already has. You had stated previously that canon Hermione would act that way, but canon Hermione was off in another reality the moment you changed her to abandon Harry during the tournament to begin with.

On a side note, did you ever notice that you brought Neville's gran back from the dead and that at the end of the first story Neville was under the guardianship of the Weasleys? Just curious if it was one of those mistakes where it was too late to change type things.

I find this chapter hilarious, Harry can't marry but he can demand no armor on his land...

I can see why people hate this story's Hermione. I usually like Hermione and I wouldn't be sad to see this one go.