|Reviews for On the Wings of Dragons|
| Hawklan chapter 15 . 3/6
tx again for sharing this fic with us I really enjoyed it so far.
| Scribe1270 chapter 19 . 3/4
I hope you will be starting to post part 3 soon. I look forward to finding out what happens next. :)
| GrimLurker chapter 19 . 2/13
I really, thoroughly despise reviewers who does nothing but demand more, which is why i will now go on to repeat myself..)
A brilliant plot and storyline, and i really like the leap in magnitude between the first and second book. I rarely find any mistakes, and when i do, it usually looks like a partly rewritten sentence that gets lost in its own negations, like "..so well hidden that not even the Chinese military cant find it". I use your pacing and spacing as an example of how to make text easy to read. Your use of various celebrities is rather well done, and the idea that the Queen makes demands that severely frustrates her politicians was hilarious, and probably true. Brits are strange, and she is indeed the Britishest of them all..)
That said, pleeze rite moar..
| sekmarcspn chapter 19 . 2/12
So it's taken me a good four days to finish reading this story and I don't care. It was totally worth every minute. My only problem is that I'm now anxious to read the next book and I'm well aware that it'll likely be several months before the whole thing is posted (once the first chapter is released). Oh well, that's what alerts are for and it's not like it'll be a hardship to re-read this story to brush up on the facts.
I think what I'm most looking forward to finding out in the next story is how weyr politics presents itself when there is more than potential Lord/Lady Weyrleader. Since it's not guaranteed that it will be a child of Harry's that will be the next person capable of speaking to all dragons or even that there will be only on person capable at a time, how will they ultimately choose Harry's successor. Or is that not going to be addressed? If not, I guess it will just be one of those things fans of the story will debate until or unless you pull a Rowling and tell us how it'll be, even if it contradicts your own canon. (If find this unlikely, since you seem much better at planning you own stories so there aren't huge gaping plot holes.)
Thanks for the story and good luck on writing that original work you mentioned. Happy Writing!
| sekmarcspn chapter 10 . 2/10
Personally, I think a HP/Muppet Babies fic would be awesomely cracky. Or maybe HP/Peanuts. Sure you don't want to write one of those? Anyway, this is an excellent story so far. The teen angst is kind of 90210, will the third part be more Melrose Place? (Does that tell you how old I am?) I've read most of the recs you've posted for this story so far and absolutely second them.
'Guy Fawkes Day' was as good as it was different from what I'd read up to that point. Thanks for reminding me of it. I look forward to finishing this story and hopefully see some kind of resolution with at least one of the crazies you've introduced. Thanks for posting another great story; Happy Writing!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 19 . 2/8
Please post a chapter or two for book 3 soon! :-D
| Noble Korhedron chapter 18 . 2/7
"curbing their enthusiasm", eh? Lousy pun I.M.O. Well, on to Ch. 19...
| mantiswizard chapter 19 . 2/6
Yes, I know, I am horribly late to do my review. I mean, it would be horribly rude of the authors to begin work on the next story without me having given my comments has been waiting with baited breath (what exactly does that mean anyway?)But in my defense, real life has gotten in the way of me posting this. But now that I have, I will magnanimously (good word, huh?) allow the authors to begin working on the next story for , again, I apologise for delaying the story. Now, on to my long awaited review...
Great story! Keep it up.
LOL. Ok, away from the jokes for a minute. I have always been impressed with Bob and Alyx's ability to bring the characters around to where they want them. Even in cannon, JK kind of lost the characters after book 4. But you guys keep me, and many others, coming back for more. I really hope that if you decide to start original works you will let us humble readers know so that we can follow your stories. And I honestly believe that if Anne McCaffrey were still with us she would get a kick out of this tale.
Now, I will go back to my patient waiting. Please don't let anyone rush you as this story is superb and does not need to be rushed out.
| Ravenfire385 chapter 5 . 2/5
I am a big fan of this story. I did notice one small error, in the last line of the story (I only noticed it cos I was reading the A/N and it caught my eye. 'Sir William chucked' - chucked what? I'm assuming he chuckled. But there you are. Keep up the work!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 7 . 2/5
Woah, nice one Potter! He cut that preening Peruvian off at the knees! *EVIL GRIN*
| rowenasheir chapter 2 . 2/5
Fanfictiondownloader and flag blocked. Even copy/paste does not work anymore! HELP
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 2/4
Interesting start. Moving on to Ch. 2...
| bipolarwithcats chapter 1 . 2/3
I recognize that cover art. It belongs to a book by my favorite writer.
| brnkofeternity06 chapter 19 . 1/31
Loved it! And I can't wait for the third book! XD
| carick of hunter moon chapter 16 . 1/31
There for a story recommendation or two The Sea King by Doghead Thirteen and Back Again? Siriusly? by Manchester,
This is a powerful chapter on one of your best written to date