Reviews for In the Beforetime
RoseSama35 chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Wow, being one of my least favorite characters, you made Shana's chapter very interesting. I guess mostly because Shana wasn't doing any talking past the beginning. There is so much about the past of the characters that the game doesn't go into. And this take, going back to Mille Seseau was excellent. I think was I really appreciated what the mysterious woman whom we surely don't know *wink wink* coming to give warning to the queen. I think that was not only sweet, but very appropriate to her character, and her disposition to her lot in life.

All in all, this was wonderful to read. Heartfelt, emotional, and at times suspenseful even though we already know what the outcome of it all is to be. Not to mention this was all written so wonderfully that the story flowed from paragraph to paragraph. Thank-you so much for sharing this because it was a pleasure to read!

RoseSama35
pumpkinpinecone chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
A very unique take on the characters, I like it! Update soon!