Reviews for Ash's Master Quest
Guest chapter 3 . 3/29
very good story please update and can u give ash a evee
Micheal myers Halloween lover chapter 3 . 2/23
Update please
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
doubledamn chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Cool. I look forward to more chapters in this story.
doubledamn chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Nice. A bit more trust between the champion-to-be and Zeus' pet mouse.
doubledamn chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Not bad. Nothing really exciting happening but still pretty good. Nice job.
AzureSkyTower chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
...sad to see that this is on hiatus its really good so far...
RHatch89 chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
you should update this
Deus Orion chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
Interesting story please update soon
bloodlinenaruto chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
update dammit i wanna know what happens
AttainableShard chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Really good so far I really liked it keep it up

This is really good loved the summery loved the story and most stories I pass by cuz they don't have a good summery or they don't fit my tastes but this was just great

P.S I have an fanfiction account but am not using it (XxShardedDragonxX)
GrayAngel13 chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
i wonder when you will update this you have a good fic going
Lewis The King chapter 3 . 4/19/2013
Nice chapter, but a Gyardos learns Hydro Pump at about level 40-44, I know that the Anime's quite a bit off key from the game but still kind of keeps in cannon for the amount of power is required to learn certain moves, if we were to measure Absol by this he is at least level 28, Pikachu-37, Spearow-33, I know about egg moves but the anime doesn't actually say they exist there, other than that pretty good.
Lewis The King chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Nice chapter, but... isn't it a bit odd for Ash's basic personality change due to one pokemon, yeah sure he could stand to be a little smarter, but if it crosses the line you could lose a significant audience of people who may have read it otherwise. Apart from that, pretty good.
Lewis The King chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Nice chapter, I liked it.
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