Reviews for Shelter
Call Me Bessie chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
I really enjoyed this piece! I can easily see why it's one of the most-favorited of this section.
However, being the nitpicky person I am, I must point out a discontinuity:
Originally, you mention the tubs in the bath house as being steel. Further on, they're porcelain. Ignoring the fact that two rows of tubs would be unlikely (I don't know for certain, but I rather think that bathing would be a kettle-by-the-fire deal for most in this time period), and that metal- steel in particular- would be unlikely, especially for a kingdom undergoing desperate poverty, porcelain would almost certainly not be had by any but the elite.
A rather particular complaint, and one about something that isn't detrimental to the story, but I think I'd like someone to do the same for me. As I mentioned before, I really enjoyed this story, and I hope you write more!
silleoneff chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Nice fic. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Really liked it. Whenever you add parentheses, the writing becomes very poetic. Good job!
ladeerelli chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
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Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
This is nothing but what we all truly wish for! Great job... what a piece!
Alison Ocean chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
You should continue - this is awesome. :)
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Please don't stop here. This is like one of the best swath fics around. Please write more. Great job!
Misty Blue chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Crazy-obsessed after watching it? Well, my cousins can say all they want, but so am I. So am I. I mean, they saw the movie with me but didn't get the same way... at all. :)

Wo...Woah! This was... intense! :) But hey, who has the right to stop love? Haha!

Great fic! Very well-written, too.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Sweet and awesome. Thanks for the read.
LovePeace chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Thats rly good! Keep writing!
Amasayda chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Very, very nice one shot. Great writing by the way! Thanks for sharing,
Jenni chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Beautiful writing. Dare I hope for a sequel? .
Sarah chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I love this! You've captured this pairing so well.
Multishipper1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Intense and romantic. I loved it :)
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