Reviews for New Kid
Guest chapter 34 . 8/1/2016
Love the chapter, but is the English names based off Harry Potter characters? Love it anyway
Pearl-Posts chapter 2 . 7/31/2016
Sorry to say, but your character sounds oh so boring. She's so devestatingly average that I stopped caring about her after the first paragraph. Also, when writing in the third person, talk only about how the characters feels towards themself and dial down the explaining. You're writing style needs flair; there are too many run on sentences. You need to analyze everything before you get into the story. I hope this helps.
hsbillie chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Awesome hope to read more of your story soon! :)
Leah chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
So far it's really good!
stefany0404 chapter 33 . 5/9/2016
I so love this story that you are writing!;)
stefany0404 chapter 24 . 5/9/2016
Awesomely mysterious.
stefany0404 chapter 21 . 5/9/2016
I thought you were going to put Rose with the Hitachin twins. 'pout'
stefany0404 chapter 15 . 5/9/2016
I feel bad for Rose. And I honestly thought that she would have told the host club that she was actually friends with Haruhi.
stefany0404 chapter 14 . 5/9/2016
So sad. It makes me almost want to tear up!
stefany0404 chapter 12 . 5/9/2016
Typical. As always, Tamaki's the drama King.
stefany0404 chapter 11 . 5/9/2016
OH. What Rose doesn't know! As always I very much enjoy reading the chapters!
stefany0404 chapter 10 . 5/9/2016
I'm glad you finally put Rose's older brother in.
stefany0404 chapter 9 . 5/9/2016
I wonder who's the slightly built person?
stefany0404 chapter 8 . 5/9/2016
I hope Rose ends up with one of the Hitachin brothers. Although my vote may be late therefor won't count. Hopefully it will though. Anyways I loved the chapter!
stefany0404 chapter 6 . 5/9/2016
The chapter was short, but was interesting.
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