Reviews for Aphelion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read all 6 chapters within an hour, I'm really glad I stumbled across this fanfic and it was a fanvid on youtube titled Loki/Hermione, Hurt me that got me searching for fanfic that supported the similar ship. No words can express how much I love the way you write...Each paragraph is so deep, thought provoking, intelligent and beautifully crafted that every once in awhile while reading, some paragraphs were actually able to pull my emotional strings even when you probably did not intend for that to happen...It's just the way you write and describe the both of them in their characteristics and also their thoughts...Just, wow. Really kudos to you for being a really great writer. Can't wait for your next update (: |
![]() ![]() WHY do you insist on killing me? By the end of this fanfic I'll be cold and dead underground. My feels! I just.. I can't even...wow. You're evil. Very evil. I'm going to go sob for a while and get fat with ice cream and by the time I get back you better have updated, OK? OK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t even know where to start about how much I love this fic. First off, kudos on the use of tachyons in relation to time turners. It gives me such a happy when people use theoretical physics to explain magic phenomenon; very creative and original explanation of the time turner concept. I love how articulate both Loki and Hermione are and their chemistry. It’s great that you are developing their relationship over time and not just having her jump him once she reaches a certain age. They have more important things to deal with than romance and it’s taking a back seat as it should. The way you write develops the characters enough for us to get deeply invested in them and that’s a true talent. Brava. Not to tell you how/what to write but if Sleipnir could just be mentioned somehow, I would die of happiness. Just imagining the look on Loki’s face when he explains the eight legged horse is just priceless. Can’t wait for the next update and Happy Writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, wow. Amazing story! My first Avengers/HP crossover fic and it got me hooked. XD But, yeah. Great job so far! Can't wait for the next update. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. I'm feeling a wee bit emotionally drained. Hermione is quite coming into her own. It was wonderful to see her exert her independence and will against Loki. For all the power and influence he has over her, she is still herself. Looking forward to answers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, truthfully, I've never been a fan of Loki. Personally, I think he's a troll. But this fanfiction has gotten me thinking about him, in a slightly different light. He's still a troll, in my opinion, but I think I understand him a little more. He's more of a man who's been wronged by too many people, unimaginably cruel and dangerously insane. So, as little of a change as that may be, insanity I can understand, so thanks for changing my point of view. :) Amazing story, I think what makes Loki/Hermione attractive is that they're complete opposites in every way imaginable. Opposites attract, after all, and this is no different. Anyhoo, every character is so dynamic and risky and incredible and...some other adjective. :D -Cocoa |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Loki seemed close to breaking down, all I could really picture was the scene in Thor between him and Odin where he tells Loki the truth about himself. Poor Loki, seriously Tom is such a wonderful actor - his voice can emote amazing things. I wasn't sure how 6th year would be, but I really do like how you've done it. I only hope that his actions at the end here won't cause Hermione to close herself off from him for too long - I don't know, she's so understanding and so attached to him already that I personally can't picture her failing to understand why he was so unwilling to allow her to place herself into a probably fatal situation. I'll be seriously looking forward to the next chapters :) And as for the tell that the Thor verse will be AU - well (grins happily) I only hope that means Hermione will be involved a lot in it - hopefully even in Asgard with dear Loki. Love this and love your style, writer! Ciao! - A devoted reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Please update soon. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely stuff :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apologies for not reviewing promptly. Storms left me without power and internet for about a week. Regardless, this is another lovely chapter. I look forward to further interactions between these two. Somehow you manage to make each one so very intriguing. Also, kudos on having Hermione's innate Gryffindor tendencies clash with what Loki is trying to convey. I do wonder what it will take for her to learn to cause pain or if she'll simply have to rely on normal wizarding spells for combat purposes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Fantastic stuff, I absolutely love it! As much as hermione is gonna be mad I really liked seeing that side of Loki and it was really cool. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I love how Hermione responded to Draco and I loved the huge growth and change made in Loli and Hermione's relationship in this chapter; I think it is the biggest change we've seen in the arc of their relationship so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot believe just how GOOD this is. I definitely mean no offense to you, but wow, this is powerful writing. The emotions are so profound without sounding maudlin or dramatic, which is always a difficult balance to maintain. I simply adore Loki here, and I can visualize these scenes perfectly. The pacing is great; I find myself holding my breath during the intense moments between Loki and Hermione. OH MY GOD. How could no one have thought of your explanation for the Time Turners? I mean, it's just so perfect! Many fics have touched upon the suspicious issuing of the Time Turner, but none have taken it where you did. I wonder if you'll touch upon this concept in the future? I am enjoying this like you have no idea. I really look forward to seeing how this plays out, as well as their romance in the future... Looking at your AN, I somehow strangely wonder if somehow, someway, if this modified Avengers team will include Hermione? Sorry about all the some-s. Thank you for posting this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story. I can't wait to see where it will go. |