I'm liking how Hermione is thinking about how she shouldnt trust him, being a demi god and the god of mischief at that, but she's also willing to trust him sorta. And then there's the lingering knowledge that, as he is the king of lies, silver tongue and all, that this could all just be an act and he's just mindfucking with her head. you know?

I like how i dont know how to take this. muahah

making me think. Good move.

also, Loki is now bipolar. woot!

thank you for noting the puberty thing. ROMANTIC DRAMA AUGHAG. I'm such a sap. Though it does add in with the whole "Should i trust him yes or no," thing. I wonder how ron will react. speaking of which, i await the whole Yule ball transformation (Perhaps Loki will be her date instead? but then Dumblydorr will see him...hmmm CONFOUNDUS?)/ fifth year Lavender Brown angstfest. that will be fun to see indeeed. and then Loki will either comfort or condescend. i think he would condescend, personally. Idlee crush angst would be beneath him, to me.

That's all i got.

See you on the weekend then!

Loved this chapter! I think you're doing amazing with your interactions with Hermione and Loki. While I can understand why people love pairing their favorite characters, there is something to be said about people becoming friends and loving each other without the romantic bits. :x

Keep up the amazing work! I'm looking forward to future chapters. :D

I am looking forward to the next update!

I love the character development. This is getting good!

i was so excited when i saw that you posted the chapter this chapter was amazing

I loved this! And I love the idea that he offered her that particular lesson.

Awesome! I loved the flirty banter exchanged between the two of them! I'm sorry about the misplacement of the story and I hope it doesn't get lost in the mail! Can't wait for what occurs next!

This is soooo awesome! Loving it. By the way, I found it because of your comment on the video "Loki/Hermione [Hurt Me]" on Youtube... and I'm glad I did, because this story is really good.

Can't wait for more!

Probably my favourite chapter so far. You're right in that it is a contrast to the other two chapters, but it doesn't jump, it sort of evolves. Hermione is older and more able to comprehend some of what Loki might say or do. The banter/flirting was well-done and it seemed just like the sort of thing Loki and Hermione might end up doing, but without being too innapropriate for her age. Can't wait for the next chapter, you're an excellent writer.

i'm really injoying your fic congratulations very curious for the next chapter

Maybe not as strong as the first chapter, but still touching. Hermione's in a confusing head space. I think that you conveyed her confusion and anger and upheaval quite well. I'm looking forward to Wednesday. (The pieces slotting into place were perfect.)

Good chapter

another great chapter! I loved it!

i found one type. He was Facing Sour.

...his entire facing sour.

...take from that what you will.

Oh man. that's what i love about Loki. He's so ...cool and level headed. most of the time. and i love how you made sure to make Thor an oaf. because he is. in the beginning. He is an oaf with luscious hair.

In terms of character, i think you did alright with Loki. he doesn't seem the type to shy away from explaining his identity. it certainly didnt seem odd that he just...answered. And he had that sort of sarcastic, but not unkind, yet still somewhat condescending tone that i am taking a liking to.

While i was reading, i started thinking about if like...his attempt at world domination would come along. seeing as the war with voldyshorts ends in the ninties and the avengees is in 2011 ish. right? it'd be interesting if hermy showed up while he was duking it out with...thor. or the hulk.

How you gonna handle that, yo?

Why'd I say that? this is what i get for reading at 630 in the morning. rawr.

If this is the weakest, then I am looking forward to the rest! I am just the tiniest bit concerned that Hermione hasn't been... know-it-all enough, but I love the characterization and you write Loki well.

If you are still looking for a beta, feel free to email me at .