Reviews for Aphelion |
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![]() ![]() If this is the weakest, then I am looking forward to the rest! I am just the tiniest bit concerned that Hermione hasn't been... know-it-all enough, but I love the characterization and you write Loki well. If you are still looking for a beta, feel free to email me at . |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I enjoyed Hermione's interrogation of Loki, even if it didn't work out like she planned. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sad start but I like your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love Loki - he's one of my newly found favorite characters. And of course I equally adore Hermione - and she's so cute as a kid - you write her extremely well - poor, picked on bushy-haired thing, kids can be so cruel, those boogers! Lol. I hope you continue with this as I'll certainly be interested in reading, please please write for us, and you'll have a guaranteed reader and reviewer in yours truly, Ciao! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a brilliant fic so far and I cant wait to see where you take this. |
![]() ![]() this is an absolutely beautiful start, more please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written and enjoyable first chapter. I can't wait to read more. :D |
![]() ![]() *Hyperventilates* This. This is amazing. please update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly enjoyed this chapter and the way in which Loki was written, as he was presented as comforting and stable while stile upholding his mysterious edge - it was amazing! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God! This story... this story... *tears gather at the edges of my eyes* this story is... beautiful! It flows perfectly, has a great plot, the grammer is perfect, and lastly, it just works! I reaaaally hope you update this soon! It's a great story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Just thought I should say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love it! I like the premise and can't wait for the rest of the school years to come. I'm glad that you are giving us the years of Hogwarts but not going to spend tons of chapters on it, allowing growth and swift flow. Can't wait for the next one! :) |
![]() ![]() I am very exited to see where you take this. :) |
![]() ![]() continue i'M curious now :) |