Reviews for Fighting Starlight
MadewithPurpose chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
You have beautiful imagery in your writing! You show creativity and a knack for creating the scene, and your characters are interesting and unique. One thing that I would suggest you do is get a beta-reader or an editor though. You have talent, but your work could be taken to the next level if you had someone proof read your creations and ask critical questions of you. Overall, it was a joy to read and very entertaining! Keep up the good work!
Tulippen chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
I like the story :D Please update soon!
AiramS chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
I can't read this story. I just can't. Seriously, have you ever read about enter? This is just painful for the eyes. I don't even bother trying to read the story. I mean, it might be fantastic and all that, but use a few enters once in a while. Or a lot. It makes it so much easier to read and it's so much more relaxing for the eyes.

If you do, then I can't wait to read your story. I just can't read it, when I constanty have to search for where in the text I am.