Reviews for Melting Heart
laurenkeyblade chapter 107 . 6/7
I really like this story! I'm super impressed you've managed to write so much for so long. The characters are very well written. I'm often confused by series of events every few chapters and it seems like some parts dont have much meaning. It's like listening to rocket science and your eyes glaze over. More Thor and Loki actually in the story maybe? That may seem like a silly request but the last two chapters nothing has happened except the last sentence. I'm probably being picky and mean. I don't mean to be! I really like this story but I would to give feedback too. I hope you take what I say not too harshly and keep the story up! I can't wait to see where it goes next. I'm excited for the oncoming conflict where Thor says Loki from the other soul! Please keep up the good work!
Raogrhys chapter 107 . 5/23
tbh i'm so confused at this point
mybonded chapter 107 . 5/15
Thanks for the update. Love to see how Thor is going to save Loki.
Guest chapter 106 . 5/15
So awesome and creative.
Killua17 chapter 106 . 5/8
Humans have an unparalleled potential when it comes to to fucking shit up.
mybonded chapter 105 . 5/6
Thank you for this update. You have worked hard at this story and have done an amazing job.
mybonded chapter 104 . 2/18
Love this...thank you
Mila Pink chapter 104 . 2/18
OMG! This story is amazing.
I like so much each chapter.

Kiss
Knaruto chapter 104 . 2/17
I was so mad and sad when u killed Thor! Wow. And then when you started giving a good plot, u stopped the story! Please finish it!
Silvermane1 chapter 104 . 2/14
Fantastic
Silvermane1 chapter 103 . 2/8
Fantastic update
mybonded chapter 103 . 2/8
Can't wait to hear the tale.
mybonded chapter 102 . 2/8
Cool
mybonded chapter 101 . 2/8
Interesting
mybonded chapter 100 . 2/8
I did not see that happening at
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