Reviews for Spirit: The Girl Of Camp Green Lake
ChickenLuv8 chapter 13 . 3/22
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2016
Hi! I realize you haven't revisited this story in years, but on the very small chance that you'll find my message, I just wanted to leave some constructive criticism. On Belladonna's character, for the bad girl/sassy girl type, you need to vary the responses people have to her outbursts or her personality will seem forced. Also adding more internal thoughts and making her less aware of people's personalities and feelings (mainly Zero) will help to develope a more believable character. This mostly come from the fact that she shouldn't know each campers personality because she hasn't seen how they interact or their back stories like we have. Just some side notes about your writing because I love a bad girl type, but if she's left under developed, she seems to act bratty for her age rather than cool and sassy. Hope this wasn't offensive- I like the story so far and I hope somehow that this gets to you almost 3 years after the last update. Keep writing! -Aimee
iblamegreenberg chapter 13 . 3/31/2016
Love this story
Can't wait for the next update xo
Micky-Moo chapter 13 . 9/12/2015
Please update soon
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3/2015
why did you stop writing this? I need to know what happens next! finish please omfg I don't know I can sleep without knowing the rest of their story. CHAPTER FOURTEEN BETTER BE COMING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! it's been over a year since you last updated!
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 13 . 5/7/2015
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 12 . 5/7/2015
Awww nooo...he got interuppted! :O
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 11 . 5/6/2015
WELL! :O I So didn't expect for them to have sex!
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 10 . 5/6/2015
:'( Why did she not tell any one about Lump! The stupid girl.
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 9 . 5/6/2015
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 8 . 5/6/2015
Loving it!
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 7 . 5/6/2015
Awwww poor Squid, he so likes her...
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 6 . 5/6/2015
WHAT?! Forget about the kiss they had?
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 5 . 5/6/2015
When will she be out?
Love.Fiction.2017 chapter 4 . 5/6/2015
Ooohh...this was good.
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