Reviews for On The Right Path
Lucyferina chapter 1 . 11/16
Loved it :)
Leppy99 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Wow just wow
feebes86 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Good job, enjoyed the story, very sweet.
renata regina chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I love Bella choosing Bella stories.
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
What happens when Jacob imprints?
lucyferina chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Maxsmomma chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Really charming (I mean that in a very good way) and well written and just how I kinda wished things had happened.

Definitely a new and strong favorite. Thank you for sharing it.

Love this line: "Maybe I still do and this is a cunning plot to get you alone and maul you." Leah said dryly, scribbling notes from a textbook.
Girl Next Door 92 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Aw, a growing up story. I love one-shots like this one. Awesome story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Bella and Jacob were always incompatible in terms of intelligence and lifestyle... SM couldn't sell me on that one no matter ho wmuch she loved her dear Jacob... not to mention.. without Edward? forget who she would have been with otherwise...she would have been ROADKILL.
xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I really like this, because I am a big TEAM JACOB fan. In my mind, Bella can do better with just about anyone other than Edward. I don't like Edward at all.

Really fantastic. Good job. chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I love Jacob/Bella, but I never realized how much I loved Bella being Bella and growing into Bella. Beautiful job. It was empowering. I enjoyed it a lot.
cullensrule chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I liked how there was a natural flow to Bella's change of heart and mind. That she stopped and listen to her instincts and heart.
MelkiSihou chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I thought this story was absolutely beautiful! It was crazy Edward or Jacob obsessed. It was Bella becoming her own person and finding out what and who she wanted to be and who she wanted in her life. I loved it!
kittycat69 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Beautiful story. Very, very well written. The idea was just perfect too. This is exactly why I am a J/B supporter. While I don't mind the occasional well-written E/B story, I hate the fics where Bella stupidly jumps into eternity without seriously considering her actions and the affects they have on her family and friends. This was a very natural story. It was a nice, easy read too. You wrote Bella's character and situation very well and I loved how it turned out. Even if you left out the Jake parts, it would still be an amazing story. Bella has found her independence, which she seriously needed to do.

Thank you for the wonderful read.
BriyerRose chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Loved it!
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