Reviews for A Pinch of Dark Magic
Guest chapter 26 . 12/24/2016
That was really good you are a master of the story telling art, and I'm not complaining or bashing your writing or anything but I would've liked it if Atem was brought up more and again still loved it Atem is just my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh character that's all. Thank you for the read and good luck with any future projects you might have in the future.
Nymphoftheglade chapter 26 . 9/17/2016
this is a really touching story
Notros chapter 4 . 9/5/2016
Akiza's bikini.

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Sister Of The Pharaoh chapter 26 . 5/25/2016
This is such an awesome story! So cute! Well done!
andymoshi chapter 3 . 2/27/2016
Just started reading this, I was directed here from 'Sunset Horizon'. Your writing shows a lot of sophistication, didn't even pick up major mistakes. As for the story itself, very funny bringing in the Dark Magician Girl as a winggirl, haha. It is heading in a good direction. Looking forward to more chapters.
Aipom4 chapter 26 . 10/19/2015
That was beautiful but I wanted more of jack and car
Guest chapter 26 . 9/16/2015
great story
Raigat chapter 26 . 7/28/2015
Great story. Excellent plot, romance, and original,creative ideas. Good work.
Jt2champ chapter 18 . 7/13/2015
And she probably is.
Jt2champ chapter 17 . 7/13/2015
You better not make Carly die. You will receive a evil review.
A Whimsical Seishin chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Interesting premise
c chapter 25 . 3/22/2015
c:
crying for days chapter 20 . 3/22/2015
:C
yusei fudo chapter 6 . 3/21/2015
im such a jerk for making akiza wait like this
lol chapter 4 . 3/21/2015
lolololol
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