|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| Hekka chapter 2 . 10/22/2014
Here is an example of hypocrisy. Sif so confidently clings at Loki's betrayal of their partnership. But they (she) did so first. Not to mention the fact that they had violated the will of not one but two kings (proving that they are true - blindly and biased - not to Asgard, and not even to their king Odin, but to the one who considers it appropriate to start a war due childish insult...
It is instead to help the one who are supposed to be their friend, when on his shoulders fell the burden of kingdom and military conflict, commenced by wanna-be-king-Thor (and all this on the basis of Sif's conviction in her own right, Hogun's support and no real facts - such a good friends they are). So did they have already served their own punishment?
And yes, Loki ruined the coronation of his brother. But not because of petty jealousy (it certainly has a place to be, but it is not determined Loki's plans - which also seems to me quite obvious from the movie). As far as I can tell, Loki hoped that - at best case - Thor go to argue with his father again for permission to get an answers from jotnar, whereby Odin would have postponed the coronation until the glorious day when Thor will acquire common sense and start thinking like a king and not a hunter for glory and adventure. And in the worst case - that in the heat of anger Thor will try to break the direct prohibition of their father about visiting of Jotunheim, and he would be detained by Heimdall, before the arrival of Odin. But this is where everything went wrong and if Thor's cohort actions to be expected, then Heimdall - who claims his loyalty to Allfather - committed treason by allowing hotheaded Thor go in the forbidden realm (and ease with which Heimdall did so leaves me with the feeling that the gatekeeper not once indulge heir's desires to the glory of battle in other realms. Probably I will not be wrong to assume that it was Loki who rescued - not once - Thor and his cohort from the deserved punishment - and hardly saw any kind of appreciation for it: it's so not honorable to equivocate and dodge. And yet Sif's appeal to Loki showed that they expect him to get Thor - and them - out of trouble).
Yes Loki lied Thor about the death of Odin. And only after that Thor finally thought about the consequences of his actions (although I do not think that Loki had planned that. Rather, he just wanted to distract Thor from the task of return home so as to have a chance to correct the mistakes of his own miscalculations and prove himself a worthy son of the father).
Besides all this deal with Destroyer... am I only one to think that if Loki wanted Thor to die, it would have happened? It got rid of the three trained Jotuns for less than a minute. Yet it did not cause any serious damage to Sif and her friends... It's not even killed one of SHIELD - just blew up their cars. And given enough time to evacuate citizens. Conclusion: when the Destroyer "fought" with the infamous quartet, it not slipped but missing on purpose. Because let's be serious - Thor was a mere mortal. So, if it was a fatal hit, by the moment when Jane reached Thor, he would not be alive.
| Hekka chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Yes. Thor so believed in his brother that immediately after his return to home, instead of trying to figure out what's going on, he lashed out at Loki with accusations...
| PeaceHeather chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
I guess I expected that being mind controlled would automatically make Thor unworthy of Mjolnir and he wouldn't be able to lift it until the control was gone.
| PeaceHeather chapter 13 . 7/11/2014
I'm enjoying the plot of this story, but the stuttering is distracting and disputes the flow of the words. I can see using it as a tool to indicate distress sometimes, but it's easy to overdo it.
| Thais Paula chapter 20 . 4/24/2014
O Loki morre? Ou foi eu que não entendi a história? Pois se ele morrer essa é uma história horrível, e eu to chorando sem nem saber se ele morreu ou não. Droga Loki . AAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhh...
| pallyndrome chapter 23 . 12/17/2013
absolutely love love LOVE this story! I am soooo glad you made it a happy ending too (though I still would have admired your writing if Loki didn't make it). Well done! :)
| TaylorToucan chapter 23 . 11/20/2013
Wow, let me just tell you that this is one of the very few stories I have read that had made me feel like I was there! The writing was amazing I had forgotten that I was reading a fanfic! The story captures the joy and pain of all characters and I am not gonna lie I cried so bad with this story, it truly was able to emotionally move me to cry as the story flowed well and the sorrow and pain that was shown was very remarkable! My dear author you have made this story an adventure that sticks with you after the end. Well done!
| Celebrin chapter 23 . 10/13/2013
Okay, so this review is for the overall story, not just this chapter.
THIS IS FEAKING INCREDIBLE! I couldn't stop reading t! This is the BEST Thor and Loki fan fiction I have ever read, and I think the best story I've ever read.
When I read a book, they never actually make me "feel like I'm really there" as many have said books can do. Let me just say, I didn't read this story. I LIVED it! I could see it! I felt it! I could smell the air, feel the cold, taste the blood. I was just...there! There, fighting along side Thor and Loki as they battled the Yggdrasis! I met the characters and felt every single one of their emotions. I laughed with them when they were happy, and I cried, literally CRIED at the end of chapter 19 when 'you know what' happened. I have never cried reading a book, and have only cried three times of all the movies and tv shows I've seen. So as you can see it's not an easy thing to do to make me cry. And you did it. You made me cry for the first time from reading a book, and that experience was not only wonderful, but one I know I will never forget.
I am not basing this review on your grammar correctness, or how well you wrote it. I'm basing this on pure, raw storytelling. The way you told this story was unbelievable. Or, I should say, believable, because it all felt so real. Because it all was real. Well done, SaoryEmmanoelle. Well. Done.
| Loki'd chapter 23 . 9/15/2013
I would LOVE if you continued this after you finish "Ancient Kings" - however, even if you choose not to, this makes an absolutely lovely ending *-*
Again, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS!
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 22 . 9/15/2013
You are more than welcome, love! *_* Thank you for writing!
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
"I have always wanted to be an uncle!"
Oh my gods, the best XD
They were exactly what they had always needed to be.
They were simply Brothers.
Feels... so many feels... aaaaaaauuuggggghhhhhhhhhhh
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 20 . 9/15/2013
Oh gods, my heart is surging right now, and my cheeks won't stop trying to smile even though it's slightly difficult while wearing rubber bands...
And it's past two am...
And I am just so ridiculously happy right now that I could really care less...
This story will always have a special place in my heart.
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 19 . 9/15/2013
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 18 . 9/15/2013
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW JFKDLSAJFLKDSAJFKLDSAJFKLJDS FJKFLDSJAFKLDSAJFLKDSAJFKLDSAJFKLDSAJF THOR NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
THOR BEING MIND CONTROLLED
DAMMIT, HE'S YOUR BROTHER THOR YOU'RE STRONGER THAN THAT
YOU'RE THE FREAKING GOD OF THUNDER
AND YOU MIND BE A STUPID MASS OF BRAWN SOMETIMES
BUT YOU'VE ACTUALLY BEEN THINKING AND NOTICING THINGS ABOUT LOKI
SO YOU'RE NOT A LOST CAUSE
On another note... I do truly believe that it was never Loki's intention to kill Thor, and that he knew Thor would succeed and really was trying to just distract him. I mean, if Loki wanted to kill Thor, he had so many opportunities when he could have...
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 17 . 9/15/2013
Oh... you've made me like Odin, in this story... I can't believe I'm actually not happy to hear that proclamation. It's just that usually he's a jerk... except he's not here, and I quite enjoyed fatherly!Odin.
I love though how even in dark chapters, there's still usually those little tidbits of humor as a small break, like: "Loki, honey So you did change your brother's book covers that time..." She thought to herself as she stared into the thousands of writings that she could not understand.
Oh Loki, that mischievous boy.