Reviews for icy heart
T chapter 6 . 6/21/2012
The ending is short and bittersweet.

I wasn't expecting Tara, Millie/Emilia's sister to have been abused too. Afterall, Millie/Emilia said she escaped didn't she? Fifteen years. That's not long, well it is but you know what I mean? Compared to the abuse and the abuse of her children, it's not long.

I'm glad they're all free. Great ending for a fantastic story, I hope you're going to write some more. xx
T chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
It was so sad when Emilia/Millie was telling Roisin and Mike about the abuse. It started when she was eight and her children are also her half-sisters. Poor girl :(

Ew, Mason/Peter is disguusting. As if he abused his other children too. I'm glad he's dead, he's horrible!

I knew you were hinting at something with Roisin! I knew it. Poor Roisin, being abused and then getting pregnant. Then aborting the child and being left infertile. You really do know how to tuck at the heart strings don't you?

Tally. Xx
T chapter 4 . 6/21/2012
I love angsty(?) chapters.

Are you implying that Roisin knows what it's like to be abused? There's something affecting her and I hope she tells Mike what it is. Another fantastic chapter, I really do enjoy your short stories.

Tally. Xx
T chapter 3 . 6/21/2012
What beautiful names! Lily and Violet, so adorable.3

I feel sorry for the children. Their father has died and, well they don't quite understand that their daddy won't be coming home. I wanted to give all three of them a great big hug.

Jesus! I wasn't expecting Peter to be born as Mason. Then, I definitely wasn't expecting Mason/Peter to be Millie/Emilia's father. THAT IS SHOCKING!

I hope Millie/Emilia is okay. Tally. Xx
T chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
OH MY GOODNESS!

He's only being dead half an hour, I wonder if they'll suspect the darling wife? I was not expecting the police to have been called to their house that amount of times! I'm guessing Peter was very violent to Emilia.

Awh, Poor Emilia :( You really know how to make a story even more shocking. I wasn't expecting the twist about Emilia being Millie Delaney. Will they find her?

Will they?

I'm going to read the next chapter. Tally. Xx
T chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
It's Tally, I've forgotten my login :(

I love your writing, it's always amazing. I now know why I put you in my favourite authors haha. This story just goes to prove it.

I love the prologue; it's not shit. I have a feeling it's more complicated than what we're lead to believe in the prologue.

I'm going to read the other chapters now. Tally. Xx
turbine wax heart chapter 3 . 6/12/2012
Omfg, this was so unexpected and shocking. I honestly was not expecting Peter/Mason to be Emilia/Millie's father. What a sick bastard he was.

I thought the first paragraph was really sad, because Lily and Violet don't really know what's going on but they know something bad has happened, if you get me :( I wanted to hug them really bad.

): And I thought the last paragraph was so sad as well, because Emilia/Millie wasn't really being fair at all, and it was just so filled with raw emotion about how the girls were feeling.

This isn't making any sense, so I'm gonna shut up now LOL.

I love you loads, please update soon! xxxxx
turbine wax heart chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Oooh, I really like this chapter!

It's so mysterious, and it brings a whole new light to the things in the prologue - like I'd never have thought "Emilia" was just an alias. ;)

Gonna admit that I gasped when it said that the police had been to Peter's house over one hundred times in the past seven months :o

It was really really exciting, and I'm jel again. I wish I could write crime fics the way you can.

I love you loads! xxxxx
turbine wax heart chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
OMG Gemma, I absolutely love this. The detail and description in here was absolutely amazing. I'm jealous ;)

Peter and Emilia seem like such interesting characters, and I bet there's a lot more going on under the surface that we haven't heard about yet. I loved the part when she killed him, yay for Emilia :3

Just wow. If I could write like you, I'd be a very happy girl :D

I'm buzzing for the next chapter, update soon please lovely!

I love you loads. xxxx