Reviews for More Beauties and More Beasts
Jade's One of a Kind chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
You have to make your chapters longer. Also, what is a silhouette? That's all I want to know, but great chapter, honestly!
Jade's One of a Kind chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
Ok, good. Be sure to give it your ALL on describing the details, it'll engage the readers more in your writing. Pretty decent job, though, I'm impressed. I liked the part in Bella's dream when you said 'The forest seemed swallow the strange house.' Very good use of figurative language. I'm highly interested into finding out more about the Gang activity and everything else. This story has potential. ;)