|Reviews for Death's Champion|
| Frostfire the Reality Breaker chapter 3 . 1/27
Interesting story you got there, love how you have the potters alive
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
WTF what idealistic crap is this?
| rb2312 chapter 3 . 1/13
Really like this story
Harry's parents are back. Sirius cleared. A potential harry daphne romance and hermiome and victor together.
Given the frosty nature of lord greengrass to draco, something tells me we will not be seing the name astoria malfoy in this fic.
Really hope ron can get over his 'all slytherins are evil' thing. At least being civil with daphne and co.
Maybe if he does we could see a ron and tracey or a ron and astoria pairing.
Wonder how ginny will react to harry dating. Demented fan girl. Heartbroken but determined to remain friends. Or happy for the couple. Which boy will she end up with? Will her partner even be a boy
How about sirius getting introduced by fleur to one of her veella relitives. One with the stunning veela looks but a temprement like lily's so she can keep the mutt under control. Sometimes. Plus having a veella a lady black would really anoy his mum.
Oh so many possibilities.
| imgonnadie chapter 3 . 1/6
Excellent story so far.
| Olaf74 chapter 3 . 1/2
| Dr8gn chapter 3 . 1/2
so awesome but ron needs a shot in the ass
| Snowball1982 chapter 3 . 12/29/2013
Thank you for the chapter. snowball
| agnar chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Eh, sorry but I lost interest when the Potters decided a fucking PRANK was payback enough for the abuse Harry suffered from the Dursleys. For fucks sake, you had Vernon physically abusing him, alongside all the canon abuse, overworked and underfed treatment!
To be honest, the introduction of the Greengrass family was pretty clumsy, and Harry and Daphne suddenly mooning over each other, like they haven't gone to the same classes for the last 4 years and just suddenly met...
Not crazy about Hermione/Krum either, he's both too old for her AND lives nearly an entire continent away, I don't see it. She doesn't need to be with Harry, but Krum is only a slightly better choice than Ron, and Ron is a terrible choice. A guy who is 4 years older, barely speaks English, plays a game she dislikes professionally, lives on the other side of Europe, has already graduated, and she knows nearly nothing about him.
I like the idea behind the fic, but I'm afraid, for me, the execution of the idea here isn't very good, sorry.
| agnar chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
The one thing I don't buy this chapter, is either Potter letting Harry out of their sight at all for the next month or so. I see one or both being around him constantly. More fitting might have been Crouch Jr. trying some suicidal attack right there, or outing himself by trying too hard to get Harry alone.
But getting that second chance at life, missing out on Harrys entire life, knowing how much he went through... I think they'd be glued to his sides to the point of smothering for awhile, not immediately forget about him 10 minutes after coming back.
| discb chapter 3 . 11/6/2013
I wonder how far Ron will fall?
| mumimeanjudy chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
So in this story Barty Jr wasn't sprung from Azkaban by his dad but was free and no-one knew he was a deatheater?
| nymlover chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
good story so far well done
| Kathy87 chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
honestly...little nice history, but can't get it why the heck would james try to convince ronald weasley...specially after their were betrayed by pettygrew...not so convincing this part and much forced dear writer!
good luck for the rest
| Ryuuohjin chapter 3 . 10/16/2013
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Nice, Ron really is a prat isn't he?