Reviews for Fumbling Toward Family
dnofsunshine chapter 1 . 5/18
I loved this. Good job.
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
Ugh, my heart is hurting. Ugh, ugh. The pain.
darkynstars chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
What. In. The. World...? WHAT IS THIS!?
It's a simple one-shot, but it's so pact with feels!? Ugh, this is so heart-wrenching! I could really see this happen, by the way. I love this! You, Author, are amazing!
It's heartwarming too, but knowing what later happened to Shiro makes this story bittersweet. He's such a great dad. The last scene was a great view of his growth to becoming their loving and supportive father.

Rin is such a great older brother! Even when he was still a baby, he was protecting and worried about Yukio!
Wow, I love him. Those three are fantastic characters.
mania20 chapter 1 . 4/20/2017
i loooveee it sooo much i could sing, god thatbwas sweet, i pray there will be more things like this
Feiy chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
This is so cute and I love how realistic the situation seemed.
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Oh this just made my heart happy :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Awww, poor Shiro but that last part of this scene was cute. Good job.
DevotedDreamer chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Such a touching story! :') I wish there were more stories like this one out there. Beautiful work!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
C'est trop bien! .
Qapleulia chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
omg no this is too cute
K.E.Alvarez chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Oh my god, that was probably one of the most adorable things I've read! Nice job :)
Dark Starlight Nekomata chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Can I just cry right now? Because that was just adorable and incredibly heart-wrenching. T.T This was a great job, by the way. Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing, tear jerking, wonderful yet simple one-shot. :')
BrokenSofia chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I absolutely LOVE this!
I hope you add more of Daddy Shiro!(:
Miyavilurver chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Amazing, powerful, touching. Thanks for writing this.
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