|Reviews for Fumbling Toward Family|
| mania20 chapter 1 . 4/20
i loooveee it sooo much i could sing, god thatbwas sweet, i pray there will be more things like this
| Feiy chapter 1 . 3/2
This is so cute and I love how realistic the situation seemed.
| 0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Oh this just made my heart happy :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
| Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Awww, poor Shiro but that last part of this scene was cute. Good job.
| DevotedDreamer chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Such a touching story! :') I wish there were more stories like this one out there. Beautiful work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
C'est trop bien! .
| Qapleulia chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
omg no this is too cute
| K.E.Alvarez chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Oh my god, that was probably one of the most adorable things I've read! Nice job :)
| Dark Starlight Nekomata chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Can I just cry right now? Because that was just adorable and incredibly heart-wrenching. T.T This was a great job, by the way. Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing, tear jerking, wonderful yet simple one-shot. :')
| BrokenSofia chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I absolutely LOVE this!
I hope you add more of Daddy Shiro!(:
| Miyavilurver chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Amazing, powerful, touching. Thanks for writing this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
darn cute rin
| ShimmeringCrimson chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
How sweet! :)
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
"If that was as normal as the books indicated, all babies must be demons."
I can see a grumpy, sleep-depraved Shiro muttering something like this when he tends his protegés... x'D It's equally credible that he has his gun pulled already when he wakes up, and that it takes him a while to override reflex and process what's actually happening. I learnt that the hard way when I moved... _ For ten years I've been flying out of bed to the right like a cannonball, to whack the alarm clock across the room. In my new apartment, there's a wall on the right side of the bed... further explanation superfluous... _'
"Wanting to cuddle him close but afraid of breaking him." Aww... And not in the "aww how cute!"-way, but more of... in the witnessing-a-miracle-and-not-daring-to-breathe-way. That... is a turning point of immense magnitude - followed by an even more tremendous one when he lets Rin see Yukio. Holy crap, man... THAT... is possibly the most beautiful thing I have read of Rin and Yukio. And Shiro. Because taking the step from guardian to actual father, and thinking of them in other terms than "the human" and "the demon": that is so powerful and awe-inspiring.
As always, your writing is an emotional bomb vacuum-packed in perfectly measured words for condensed, maximum effect. I love it.