Reviews for The plain truth
Made2352 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Aww, that was one of the sweetest, kind of messed up, but very appealing stories I ever read. Even though someone was killed for such a sake, it was very nice. At first when I found out he was the one who choose to kill her, I was like... o.o wow. But I quickly got over once that Squalo and Xanxus scene appeared.
YaoiMadness chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Oh God! Never known Xanxus could be so attached to Squalo! It would be awesome to read te next part! Thanks for your work! I'd like to read more from you :)
Taraen chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
"{A/N} - The concept of Xanxus killing his fiancee for Squalo is really really appealing." That's so true! There's a Doujinshi that has that theme too, I really liked it
Sooo, yes, I definitely liked your fanfiction too. I was feeling with Squalo, and I was so happy when she died... I wonder if I'm a terrible person? xD
Sakura chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
All of EBIten's work are masterpieces, and you've really done this one justice. It's like I fell in love with XS all over again. Thank you.
MegaUltraChicken chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I love this story it's one of my favorite XS ones! :) you should write it from Xanxus' POV as well xxx :D
Akatsuki Fatale chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
D'awww! So cute in a XS way!
oninoshirosaki chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Hi again.

So I know you already know that I love this fic, but I wanted to leave a proper review. I love your take on 'Underwater' - one of the things I love about fanfic are the remixes on existing stories. It's interesting to get a fresh perspective.

This fic literally HURT to read - and I mean that in a good way. I could feel everything Squalo was going through - his loneliness, his rage, his agony, ALL of it. Every sentence, every scene was constructed so impeccably that his every emotion was palpable. Being able to make your readers feel what the POV character is going through takes an immense amount of talent, and you have it, SlamShady.

I also loved Squalo's interaction with Mammon. That's a relationship I wish would be explored more often in fandom. And I like that you have both Mammon and Fran in your fics at the same time.

The part that really resonated with me was Squalo's anger at the way Alessandra so casually called Xanxus by name. I not only felt that it was really true to Squalo's character, but I could also relate to his anger (for personal reasons).

And I really loved how Xanxus kept showing Squalo - in his own way - how much he actually loved him, and did not give a shit about Alessandra at all.

I fucking LOVED the way Alessandra died. Yeah, it was fucking awesomeballz. What can I say? I like gore. Haha. Or maybe what I REALLY liked was the fact that Xanxus had her killed because of what she did to Squalo (and himself). I love possessive Xanxus.

My favorite line : "Don't you dare think I'll love anyone else." Pure brilliance.

And of course, I really loved the final line : "If it was for Xanxus, he'd fight a thousand wars if he had to."

Oh, that's another thing I love about your writing - the ability to deliver these amazeballz lines at all the right moments. Impactful as fuck.

No, this fic wasn't too romantic for the pairing. It had the perfect amount of romance. And it's easily one of your best works, SlamShady.

And with this, I've officially spammed your inbox. So sorry if that bothers you. I just really had to express how much I love your work. Thanks for taking the time to read my super long reviews, and for writing such awesome fics! :)

Have a great day! :)

oninoshirosaki.
101sakurakiss chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I loved your author note at the the end. I loved the story too but that last piece was really funny.
FallenxLinkin chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Yes... Yes it is :))
Indochine chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I hadn't read your author note before reading the story, and when I was done I thought 'hey that reminded me of the doujin Underwater' (a true masterpiece, indeed), and then I saw that you had mentionned it above the story, so it's not just my imagination! ;)

Wonderful story! :) I'm glad I decided to go reread your essay on why Squalo is gay for Xanxus on tumblr (I agree on everything you said! ;)) because I was bored, and then I saw that you had a profile on , so I went to read what you wrote! ;)

I'll go read Within Pandemonium and Monster now! ;)
Yumeina-sama chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
very appealing indeed :)))
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Oohhh... #stillstunned

I... I don't... know... how to say. It's... it's surprising but not surprising...
This is something that Xanxua will Do if his special person or thing get away from him. But still...
LaughterGirl chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
This is so brilliant! I loved this so much! I personally love the 'underwater' doujinshi and find this story is a wonderful adaption (I think that is the right word).

Some of the lines in the story really made me squee in happiness! Thank you for re uploading by the way A
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I totally agree with ya!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
My goodness you are one dumbass bitch.
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