Reviews for Little XY junior
Lady Jamboreemon chapter 3 . 10/14/2014
Soo cool! Keep updating this though. I wanna know if Adam survivs and all.
Lady Jamboreemon chapter 2 . 10/14/2014
I noticed a lot, but what's that fire catching thing? Pretty cool, but did little Adam get burnt from it? Please make you sentences more clear, like less with the grammar and spelling errors.
Lady Jamboreemon chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
So, I guess little Adam is 781229, right? Maybe, he's actually 781227 and 8.5 respectively, don't know?
Bman1106 chapter 3 . 9/17/2014
Wait why did you stop writing this story? The idea for it is so good!
eli chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Good idea, but you should work on your story.
The writing style is lacking, so do the spelling and grammar.
You just need some work but it could be good.
remma chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really love this story,please don't give up
mc aj chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
i love the story it was great thank you
Melitchy chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
Nice so, you're going to write more?
Cool! And for your mistakes, i can't complain, i make a lot myself. That's why i always tell my followers to excuse me since my mother tongue isn't English
Luka Knight chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
oh no Adam can't die :''(
raploard chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
woow nice work
MR DKM chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
It's really good. There's a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. The I's also need to be capitalized. Mind the subject-verb agreement as well. I'm sure you can proofread this again. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good Luck! :))
mc aj chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
it was good you should continue but their was a little errors but i understand what you was saying
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I love how this is going, I really do but this just needs so much editing. I got confused for a bit on some parts because of this. The plot is really great though!
tatiana chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
wow
Irishgirl86 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
hmm... bet jessi is gonna pitch a fit when she finds out
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