|Reviews for Little XY junior|
| eli chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Good idea, but you should work on your story.
The writing style is lacking, so do the spelling and grammar.
You just need some work but it could be good.
| remma chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really love this story,please don't give up
| mc aj chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
i love the story it was great thank you
| Melitchy chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
Nice so, you're going to write more?
Cool! And for your mistakes, i can't complain, i make a lot myself. That's why i always tell my followers to excuse me since my mother tongue isn't English
| Luka Knight chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
oh no Adam can't die :''(
| raploard chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
woow nice work
| MR DKM chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
It's really good. There's a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. The I's also need to be capitalized. Mind the subject-verb agreement as well. I'm sure you can proofread this again. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good Luck! :))
| mc aj chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
it was good you should continue but their was a little errors but i understand what you was saying
| Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I love how this is going, I really do but this just needs so much editing. I got confused for a bit on some parts because of this. The plot is really great though!
| tatiana chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
| Irishgirl86 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
hmm... bet jessi is gonna pitch a fit when she finds out
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
... Hope you continue I guess it could be a good story
| Melitchy chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I really do like the idea of this story!
I never thought about something like did happening in the serie!
| SharpenedPencilAndReady2Mingle chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Nice, i'd love to see an update soon
| danni98 chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I like it! Try using a beta reader,they can help u smooth out the story! They r also good to bounce ideas off please update soon!