This chapter was so perfect, I just had to review.

The integration of the dialogue from the script worked very well, I was impressed as so often people just churn it out as though it doesn't matter what you put around it - they think it speaks for itself because you've seen the show, or something like that. Anyway, it was perfect, and Amarah fitted into the scene really nicely. The retelling of her first kill was great and I liked both the knights' and the King's reaction, and I LOVE how she gets on with Podrick, who is in my opinion severely underrated, poor lad. She's one of the most interesting OC's I've met and by far the most volatile!

Look forward to your next update!

Vive x

Ooh, finally some Jaime and Amarah. Loved their banter. Great writing. Can't wait for more. Keep updating!

Interesting story so far, can't wait to read more!

Already a new chapter? YAY, you certainly made my evening better, update ASAP x :)

Loving it! UPDATE SOON! ]

Well you certainly update fast! Great chapter again :)

This story sounds promising! Love it. x Maybe there'll be a conversation between Jaime and Amara in the new chapter perhaps? x

Well this is a very promising start to hopefully a good story. I hope there will be more chapters to follow :)

Wow...I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next and I am very intrigued by Robb's actions and as always I love whenever Tyrion can be his usual witty self. Great job! I will be patiently waiting for another chapter :)

Really liked this. Tyrion's conversation at the end seemed very like him. And i like the added character, just bitchy enough to be interesting, but not annoying. Like it alot so far! keep the chapters coming!

Im very excited to see where this is going! Amarah seems like a very well crafted and developed OC, I think it will be a lot of fun to see a relationship with Jaime where there is already a poor one established between them. And it sounds like she already knows about the incest... Great start :)

She really sounds like a cold bitch! Anyway I'm intrigued by the story. UPDATE SOON! ]

I like where this is going, you have a solid backstory and I like the tension between her and the Lannisters even her own father. I love the fact that Tyrion is the only one she can stand, her little lion bestie :D Can't wait to read more, you need a lot more Jaime! Happy Writing.

Love the story...can't wait to see where you take the story as there is just so many possibilities.