Reviews for Where Loyalty Truly Lies
PATFan chapter 9 . 5/5/2014
Great chap love it please write another one can't wait to see what happens next don't give up on this one please xxx
brpetal chapter 9 . 9/25/2013
Please continue I'm loving this
chloemcg chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
Yay! Sorry, I haven't reviewed. It was just that I forgot to do so. The last one was when I was very upset that it had a dark ending but I'm glad that you're changing the plot. I hope I didn't offend you by this comment. Anyways, I wish you luck on the story and I'll let you know if I have any suggestions for any future chapters.

Thanks for uploading! :)
Chloemcg chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
Awwwww... Please update! I want the next chapter to be up.

It's October and I want to see the new chapter...

Anyways I have a question or more like a suggestion for a few chapters forward. Why doesn't Felicier attempt to come back to life somehow and Angie risks her life to save new Oreleans from his grasp?

It's just an idea. Anyways I have three words.

starrscar chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
This chapter was definately longer. Thanks for that! And for your question in the last author's note: No, this story isn't dragging or boring. For your school, it's no problem, so long as you don't abandon this story for your new one. :D
Queeny aka SSG chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
Take Ur time girly :) and no I do not think its boring or dragging on. In fact I find it more anoying when authors rush threw a story. So keep On at the pace Ur going :) 3 peace
chloemcg chapter 5 . 7/30/2012
To answer your question, NO I don't find it in the least bit boring and it's alright I can wait and I'm pretty sure that the others reading this can too.

If you get frustrated just think that when your writing the next chapter again, it'll be much better then the last one. Anyways good luck and I have a question?

What happened to Louis the alligator (the alligator that helped Tiana and Naveen)? Is he even in this story?
RatchetGirl2000 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Very interesting! -
scarletanna chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Man, I finished reading this chapter in 1 minute. Literally! I love that you had them meet in this chapter. Are they going to meet again in the next chapter? I really do hope you make the next chapter longer. Awesome chapter,as always. Please update soon!
chloemcg chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Ohhhh...A meeting! That's the first sign of a one way romance. A mysterious boy shows up, after a while the main girl can't stop thinking about him, she runs away since she was that desperate to find him again, then the true adventure begins!

I know that may not be what you planned but if you hadn't thought of any ideas then that could be one.
Anyways I can't wait for another chapter! Good luck!
starrscar chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Aww! Why did the chapter have to end so soon? I really do hope the next one is longer. I felt like you made Sam kind of aloof. I mean, isn't he supposed to be in a relationship with Angie? However on Angie's part, I felt like you captured her perfectly. Is it because she is easier to write about? I loved the ending with Angie and James. Such a perfect brother-sister moment! Great chapter, plz update soon!
chloemcg chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
I think I know whats going to happen, Evangiline and Sam meet and fall in love, am I right? Anyways great story! Update soon!
starrscar chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
The title of this chapter fit really well. I was so confused near the end! This chapter wasn't bad to me. If you don't get any more reviews, please don't let it keep you from writing more. Please update soon!
a kiss of winter chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
... Did Mama Odie fix it all or not?

... Holy guac. THEY'RE GOING AFTER ANGIE o.o


Quick Question; Are Ray and James affected by the same spell Angie's under? :/

chloemcg chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Why do I get the feeling that Evangaline is their "Key?" Although I wonder what they need her for? Will they have the same intentions with her as they did with her father (You know the blood thing)? Or are they going to use her for something evil (I'm guessing the second but this is your story, not mine.) Anyways THIS IS GREAT!
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