Reviews for new kid in school
A Grammar Nazi chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
i hope you don't find this offensive. I think you need to work on your grammar and spelling. you need quotation marks, too. But it's a really good story! Hope this helps!
Grell1FanGirl at chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
It's a good story! The only problems it has is the punctuation. in a few places there should be comas, (Don't feel bad, I still have bitch of a time with that.) And a couple of mis-spelled words. Other than that, I love it. Please continue!