|Reviews for Hello Goodbye|
| CheerLoveGale chapter 7 . 12/9/2012
Hey my username is CheerLoveGale but I'm reading on my Kindle and the stupid piece of junk won't let me log in, so... yeah. Anyway, OMG I like totally love your story! It's like totally awesome. I randomly start dying laughing in my room and my parents must think I'm going crazy up here, but I'm not. I'm laughing at Edmund, LOL! He's a hoot! Love it! Please update really really soon, though, because I'm running out of good Edmund/OC stories to read, and none of them are getting updated very much :( LOL. But still, an update, please? And just one little request, at the ball, could it be a really long chapter about how Edmund and Ariana are dancing and they get feelings for her and, oh, I don't know, maybe even... a kiss? Or more than one? I really like the Edmund romance stories, that's really what I'm looking for, and again, you're one ofthe few people who write great ones that I haven't [hopefully] read all of yet LOL. So please an update and an Edmund/Ariana sweet moment or two... or more;) Thanks!
| Daring to be Different chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
A suggestion when changing POVs have a line break in between them to help the reader know that the POV is changing to another character.
| Daring to be Different chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
These first couple of chapters have been really good the one problem is spelling and grammar, I definitly recommend a BETA reader who can help you correct those problems.
| DawnDestination chapter 7 . 10/17/2012
Don't stop, alright?:)))
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
Whoa it's been a while...update! Please update fast! Why did Edmund leave and why didn't he want to say anything in front or Ariana?!
| Evanna23 chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
There's only one thing I dislike...
how long it takes you to update!
| LobstaFace17 chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
| That Elusive Reader chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
'Tis a wonderful review! This is a great story. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Please continue!
| Nightskylove chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
I find the story very interesting! Keep writing ;P
| Roundabout Of Red Roses chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
Brilliant! Don't worry about your english, the only thing that I noticed was that instead of "France" put French as you are stating the name of the language not the place.
But it was great either way!
| Roundabout Of Red Roses chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Amazing, can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon please.