Reviews for Pinned
sirius ordo chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Loved it! That was incredibly hot! I'm glad you wrote it!
KoteDiM chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Phew.. I almost had to contact my doctor for a few moments in fear that my heart would beat out of my chest. Instant fave. You've done an amazing job with this. Great build up, nice writing style.. Everything points to an A
Big thumbs up from Denmark
cznam chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Very hot story, i like the humor touch. Thanks for the fun !
Fanning myself chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
That's hot! I'll be in my bunk.
Black Jack278 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
This was a magnificent piece, I absolutely loved it. Great work!
HarlequinRavenwing chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Passionate, breathless and completely engrossing.

As Harlequinn Ravenwing, I reviewed Blind and was utterley captivated by your characterisation and your wonderful erotic prose. This is just as good and after re-reading both stories, what really stands out is that you give these people such life, that they leap out of the screen as real people.

The thoughts they have as they make love are in many ways, much more personal than the act itself, and yet you manage to weave everything together in a way that is totally beleiveable and so incredibly hot (for want of a better word).

Ususally a Garrus fan, you have made a Vega-beleiver out of me!
spykid chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
This is really just perfect. I haven't read Blind, but now I have to!
Quilate chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Omg ! I tought blind was already hot... But this ! Oh waw ! Makes me wanna read more again x) thank you for the writting!
Samolfran chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
daym! That was hot!