You have an interesting twist on the plotlines of your fics. For now, I will look for fluffier fics.

I dont know
Started interesting but quickly declined

This is kinda bashing fic, although the bashing not as bad as other fic.

What a great story! I just found it thanks to reddit. Not sure if you're still getting messages regarding this but great work!

Cleverly done - thank you.

This is so creepy but believable. I was wasn't huge on that last line. I was hoping he'd like Harry enough to keep him if he found whatever power..

use his polyjuice experiments to mix Bella and Dora. So Bella can maybe become a metamorph, hiding in plain sight.

I feel like Voldie could totally get away with saying he was reincarnated as Harry's brother, if it is ever found out who he really is. I mean, he would not even be lying.

I feel like I want MC to be trying to become a metamorph. Maybe using Tonks Blood. Maybe studying her and her abilities. Maybe using his combined knowledge, his studies of her, and the Black Library?

Hm... I feel like MC should have felt his horcrux was on the train, or maybe its presence on Ginny. At least noticed the thoughts when connected to the ceiling.

Still think MC/Harry should do/say something about the portrait... I mean, it is a HUGE issue that a Family Heirloom and Portrait was stolen and likely destroyed.
Also feel/hope that MC(Voldie) should have copied all the books he comes across, in Hogwarts, in Grimauld, everywhere.

Really do not understand why nothing is being done about Lily's portrait.

HA! Soul bond... Should reuse that trick and start a harem.

MC should abso-friggin-lutely get in touch with the Aurors and Madam Bones. Dumbles stealing a family portrait, destroying it, destroying Harry's wand, allows snape to attack them both... yeah, they may have loose laws/control, but there are limits.

I cannot see Dumbledore being allowed alone in the same room with them, after everything he has done, and been caught doing.

needs to get the map from the twins, or rather... find the map that he should know is somewhere in the school.