Reviews for Yes, I am Harry's Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Twisted. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, was rereading your story and just noticed one peculiar thing. I'm really curious why you keep spelling the word "creature" with a diacritical mark? Is it just historical stylisation or is that how the word is spelled in your native tongue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly love the story. Vito is an interesting character. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story, it is such fun to read. Voldie is such a contradiction! This is one of those fics that prove you can't rely on the review count. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving my second read. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I love this story! This is a re-read, but it still is absolutely fascinating. I love Vito...even though he is suppose to be bad. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story. I liked your depiction of Voldemort- he has his same ambitions but the cunning and flexibility to adapt while at the same time maintains his character as a Dark Lord. |
![]() ![]() Vito could totally bribe the hell out of Snape with that portrait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A glorious story! I laughed my ass off the entire time, and adored the well crafted plot. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it very much! |
![]() ![]() One of the best there is. And I have no better praise than that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story xxxxxx |
![]() ![]() Wow. This is one amazing story. I particularly like the way Voldermort/Vito is characterized: As you read this story, you slowly become more and more aware that yes, he is evil. He goes around murdering people without even a thought about morality, and that is especially disconcerting, because the way it is presented, the reader does not feel the horror of these murders, because Voldermort doesn't, and in fiction, the default is for the reader to go along with the emotional state of the protagonist, in this case, just considering it completely trivial. This then leads to a very disconcerting (in a good way!) feeling when I realized that yes, Voldermort just slaughtered a bunch of people, and I didn't think anything of it. The emotional impact of that is huge. Once again, I feel that this is a well written and wonderful story. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very well-done! thanks for the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really interesting story. Perhaps Tom had already been defeated, and Vito is the result? |